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作者: 叶秋    时间: 2010-3-18 10:53
标题: 沁园春　游蓬莱（飘红推精）
  
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[此贴子已经被作者于2010-03-23 08:16:33编辑过]

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作者: 浪中行吟    时间: 2010-3-18 17:54
<p>真好词，蓬莱仙境之飘渺意境可见，且追忆古今，有沧桑之感。飘红推之！</p>

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作者: 隔水伊人    时间: 2010-3-19 08:32
<p>品赏飘红佳作！问候楼主早安！</p>

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作者: 叶秋    时间: 2010-3-19 09:07
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>浪中行吟</i>在2010-03-18 17:54:36的发言：</b><br/>
<p>真好词，蓬莱仙境之飘渺意境可见，且追忆古今，有沧桑之感。飘红推之！</p></div>
<p>谢首版鼓励，问好！</p>

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作者: 叶秋    时间: 2010-3-19 09:08
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>隔水伊人</i>在2010-03-19 08:32:12的发言：</b><br/>
<p>品赏飘红佳作！问候楼主早安！</p></div>
<p>谢关注，问好！</p>

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作者: 浪中行吟    时间: 2010-3-19 14:59
提赏！

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作者: 梅影点点    时间: 2010-3-19 16:47
起结都妙，拜读学习！

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作者: 锄月花樵    时间: 2010-3-19 22:22
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>浪中行吟</i>在2010-03-18 17:54:36的发言：</b><br/>
<p>真好词，蓬莱仙境之飘渺意境可见，且追忆古今，有沧桑之感。飘红推之！</p></div>
<p>同感，附议，赏读。并问好楼主！</p>

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作者: 浪中行吟    时间: 2010-3-20 12:32
精华再赏！

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作者: 司马长风    时间: 2010-3-20 22:24
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>梅影点点</i>在2010-03-19 16:47:30的发言：</b><br/>起结都妙，拜读学习！ </div>
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"4\">同感。<br/>躬亲造访、福寿齐修---唯觉此两句对得不大工整。再者造访必躬亲，岂有人代之理，有些累赘。<br/></font></p>

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作者: 叶秋    时间: 2010-3-21 17:49
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>浪中行吟</i>在2010-03-19 14:59:36的发言：</b><br/>提赏！ </div>
<p>谢谢再度关注，问好首版！</p>

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作者: 叶秋    时间: 2010-3-21 17:50
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>梅影点点</i>在2010-03-19 16:47:30的发言：</b><br/>起结都妙，拜读学习！ </div>
<p>谢谢关注，问好诗友！</p>

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作者: 叶秋    时间: 2010-3-21 17:50
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>锄月花樵</i>在2010-03-19 22:22:58的发言：</b><br/>
<p>同感，附议，赏读。并问好楼主！</p></div>
<p>谢谢关注，问好首版！</p>

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作者: 叶秋    时间: 2010-3-21 17:53
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>浪中行吟</i>在2010-03-20 12:32:46的发言：</b><br/>精华再赏！ </div>
<p>多谢首版鼓励，请多赐教！</p>

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作者: 叶秋    时间: 2010-3-21 17:55
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>司马长风</i>在2010-03-20 22:24:11的发言：</b><br/>
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"4\"><font size=\"2\">同感。<br/>躬亲造访、福寿齐修---唯觉此两句对得不大工整。再者造访必躬亲，岂有人代之理，有些累赘。</font><br/></font></p></div>
<p>多谢赐教，已作修改，望再指点。问好！</p>

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作者: 土烟斗    时间: 2011-1-19 11:10
欣赏精华作品。

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