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标题: [原创]雨霖铃赠友人 [打印本页]

作者: 沧浪布衣 时间: 2010-3-20 10:33
标题: [原创]雨霖铃赠友人
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作者: 浪中行吟 时间: 2010-3-20 12:28
<p>有离乡之愁唱，有时匆之沧桑感，有归隐之意愿。。。好赠，先飘红共赏！</p>

作者: 沧浪布衣 时间: 2010-3-20 13:35
还请行吟赐教为盼！问好！

作者: 司马长风 时间: 2010-3-20 22:16
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"4\"><font color=\"#000000\">天涯落月犹照，帆影断、水天萧瑟</font>---最喜这几句。</font></p>
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"4\">整体看来，挺好。就是感觉太古色古香了些。</font></p>

作者: 沧浪布衣 时间: 2010-3-20 22:29
谢谢司马长风阅卷点评，问好！

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