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标题: 第七期作业：清明 [打印本页]
作者: 司马长风    时间: 2010-4-3 21:59
标题: 第七期作业：清明
<p align="center"><font face="黑体" size="5">清 明</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="4">杜宇声中草木稠，漫天霏雨挂眉头。</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="4">荒丘一缕青烟起，接引阴阳两处愁。</font></p>
作者: 紫嫣郡主    时间: 2010-4-3 22:26
<font size=\"1\">荒丘一缕青烟起，接引阴阳两处愁。欣赏！问好司马兄！</font>
作者: 白雪仙子    时间: 2010-4-3 22:28
司马版的绝句有味！
作者: 司马长风    时间: 2010-4-3 23:19
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>紫嫣郡主</i>在2010-4-3 22:26:59的发言：</b><br/><font size=\"3\">荒丘一缕青烟起，接引阴阳两处愁。欣赏！问好司马兄！</font> </div>
<p>谢郡主清赏。同好！</p>
作者: 司马长风    时间: 2010-4-3 23:20
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>白雪仙子</i>在2010-4-3 22:28:37的发言：</b><br/>司马版的绝句有味！ </div>
<p>有味还谈不上，学习中。要完成作业，凑数而已。</p>
作者: 诗酒当歌    时间: 2010-4-4 13:35
<p>层次井然有序，转结出新，结得精彩。</p>
<p> </p>
作者: 一行白鹭    时间: 2010-4-4 18:01
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>诗酒当歌</i>在2010-4-4 13:35:37的发言：</b><br/>
<p>层次井然有序，转结出新，结得精彩。</p>
<p> </p></div>
<p>同感。</p>
作者: 司马长风    时间: 2010-4-5 00:17
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>诗酒当歌</i>在2010-4-4 13:35:37的发言：</b><br/>
<p>层次井然有序，转结出新，结得精彩。</p>
<p> </p></div>
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"4\">谢诗酒版清赏。请多指教！</font></p>
作者: 司马长风    时间: 2010-4-5 23:29
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>湘弦绝响</i>在2010-4-5 21:47:55的发言：</b><br/><strong><font face=\"Arial\" size=\"4\">起码比我写得好。</font></strong> </div>
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"4\">湘总之诗如古井，小可之诗如浅溪，何敢比肩？</font></p>
作者: 隔水伊人    时间: 2010-4-6 11:11
<p>品赏司马版好绝！学习问候！</p>
作者: 锄月花樵    时间: 2010-4-6 19:07
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>司马长风</i>在2010-4-5 23:29:59的发言：</b><br/>
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"4\">湘总之诗如古井，小可之诗如浅溪，何敢比肩？</font></p></div>
<p>古井深邃，浅溪明碧，各有其妙。</p>
作者: 司马长风    时间: 2010-4-6 21:13
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>锄月花樵</i>在2010-4-6 19:07:32的发言：</b><br/>
<p>古井深邃，浅溪明碧，各有其妙。</p></div>
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"4\">樵兄评我多溢美，我评樵兄多挑刺。呵呵</font></p>
作者: 晚秋红叶    时间: 2010-4-7 12:06
好绝！ 赏学 问好楼主
作者: 隔水伊人    时间: 2010-4-7 14:10
欣赏学习了！
作者: 司马长风    时间: 2010-4-8 08:16
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>晚秋红叶</i>在2010-4-7 12:06:17的发言：</b><br/>好绝！ 赏学 问好楼主 </div>
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"4\">谢谢！请多指教。</font></p>
作者: 司马长风    时间: 2010-4-8 08:17
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>隔水伊人</i>在2010-4-7 14:10:29的发言：</b><br/>欣赏学习了！ </div>
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"4\">问好伊人！互相学习。</font></p>
作者: 闲情弈致    时间: 2010-4-13 23:28
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>司马长风</i>在2010-4-3 21:59:56的发言：</b><br/>
<p align=\"center\"><font face=\"黑体\" size=\"5\">清 明</font></p>
<p align=\"center\"><font size=\"4\">杜宇声中草木稠，漫天霏雨挂眉头。</font></p>
<p align=\"center\"><font size=\"4\">荒丘一缕青烟起，接引阴阳两处愁。</font></p></div>
<p>  </p>
<p class=\"Web1\" style=\"WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center\" align=\"center\"><b style=\"mso-bidi-font-weight: normal\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: #3366ff; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体\"><font color=\"#333333\" size=\"6\">清 明 祭 父</font></span></b></p>
<p class=\"Web1\" style=\"WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center\" align=\"center\"><b style=\"mso-bidi-font-weight: normal\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: #3366ff; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体\"></span></b><b style=\"mso-bidi-font-weight: normal\"><span lang=\"EN-US\" style=\"FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: #3366ff; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%\"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = \"urn:schemas-microsoft-comfficeffice\" /><o:p><font face=\"黑体\" color=\"#999999\" size=\"3\">效颦步韵，莫笑班门弄斧</font></o:p></span></b></p>
<p class=\"Web1\" style=\"WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center\" align=\"center\"><font face=\"黑体\"><font color=\"#808080\"><b style=\"mso-bidi-font-weight: normal\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: #333333; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial\"></span></b><b style=\"mso-bidi-font-weight: normal\"><span lang=\"EN-US\" style=\"FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: #333333; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%\"><o:p></o:p></span></b></font></font> </p>
<p class=\"Web1\" style=\"WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center\" align=\"center\"><b style=\"mso-bidi-font-weight: normal\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: #3366ff; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial\"><font face=\"黑体\" color=\"#800080\">莺倦茅衰苦雨稠，江流何事皱眉头。</font></span></b></p>
<p class=\"Web1\" style=\"WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center\" align=\"center\"><b style=\"mso-bidi-font-weight: normal\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: #3366ff; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial\"><font face=\"黑体\" color=\"#800080\">只因杜宇声凄婉，难报严恩满腹愁。</font></span></b></p>
<p class=\"Web1\" style=\"WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center\" align=\"center\"><b style=\"mso-bidi-font-weight: normal\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: #3366ff; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial\">自题</span></b></p>
<p class=\"Web1\" style=\"WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center\" align=\"center\"><b style=\"mso-bidi-font-weight: normal\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: #3366ff; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: #3366ff; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA\"><font face=\"黑体\">天外有天楼外楼，矫情随兴和吟俦。</font></span></span></b></p>
<p class=\"Web1\" style=\"WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center\" align=\"center\"><b style=\"mso-bidi-font-weight: normal\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: #3366ff; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: #3366ff; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA\"><font face=\"黑体\">论坛多有高人在，井底之蛙始害羞。</font></span></span></b><b style=\"mso-bidi-font-weight: normal\"><span lang=\"EN-US\" style=\"FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: #333333; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%\"><o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
作者: 司马长风    时间: 2010-4-14 22:40
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>闲情弈致</i>在2010-4-13 23:28:16的发言：</b><br/>
<p>  </p>
<p class=\"Web1\" style=\"WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center\" align=\"center\"><b style=\"mso-bidi-font-weight: normal\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: #3366ff; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体\"><font color=\"#333333\" size=\"6\">清 明 祭 父</font></span></b></p>
<p class=\"Web1\" style=\"WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center\" align=\"center\"><b style=\"mso-bidi-font-weight: normal\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: #3366ff; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体\"></span></b><b style=\"mso-bidi-font-weight: normal\"><span lang=\"EN-US\" style=\"FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: #3366ff; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%\"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = \"urn:schemas-microsoft-comfficeffice\" /><o:p><font face=\"黑体\" color=\"#999999\" size=\"3\">效颦步韵，莫笑班门弄斧</font></o:p></span></b></p>
<p class=\"Web1\" style=\"WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center\" align=\"center\"><font face=\"黑体\"><font color=\"#808080\"><b style=\"mso-bidi-font-weight: normal\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: #333333; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial\"></span></b><b style=\"mso-bidi-font-weight: normal\"><span lang=\"EN-US\" style=\"FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: #333333; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%\"><o:p></o:p></span></b></font></font> </p>
<p class=\"Web1\" style=\"WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center\" align=\"center\"><b style=\"mso-bidi-font-weight: normal\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: #3366ff; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial\"><font face=\"黑体\" color=\"#800080\">莺倦茅衰苦雨稠，江流何事皱眉头。</font></span></b></p>
<p class=\"Web1\" style=\"WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center\" align=\"center\"><b style=\"mso-bidi-font-weight: normal\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: #3366ff; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial\"><font face=\"黑体\" color=\"#800080\">只因杜宇声凄婉，难报严恩满腹愁。</font></span></b></p>
<p class=\"Web1\" style=\"WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center\" align=\"center\"><b style=\"mso-bidi-font-weight: normal\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: #3366ff; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial\">自题</span></b></p>
<p class=\"Web1\" style=\"WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center\" align=\"center\"><b style=\"mso-bidi-font-weight: normal\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: #3366ff; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: #3366ff; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: \'Times new=\" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: Roman?; new=\"New\" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: mso-ascii-font-family: New?><font face=\"黑体\">天外有天楼外楼，矫情随兴和吟俦。</font></span></span></b></p>
<p class=\"Web1\" style=\"WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center\" align=\"center\"><b style=\"mso-bidi-font-weight: normal\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: #3366ff; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: #3366ff; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: \'Times new=\" AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: Roman?; new=\"New\" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: mso-ascii-font-family: New?><font face=\"黑体\">论坛多有高人在，井底之蛙始害羞。</font></span></span></b><b style=\"mso-bidi-font-weight: normal\"><span lang=\"EN-US\" style=\"FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: #333333; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%\"><o:p></o:p></span></b></p></div>
<p>  <font size=\"4\"><font color=\"#800000\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana\">谢谢吟兄雅和。</span><span lang=\"EN-US\"><o:p></o:p></span></font></font></p>
<p><font size=\"4\"><font color=\"#800000\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana\"><font color=\"#0000ff\">江流何事皱眉头</font></span><span lang=\"EN-US\">---</span><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana\">比拟甚佳，且与意境甚切。此所谓景语即情语也。</span><span lang=\"EN-US\"><o:p></o:p></span></font></font></p>
<p><font size=\"4\"><font color=\"#800000\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana\">论坛高人自是多有，然小可不敢入列。得与吟兄相切磋，则幸甚。不揣浅陋，亦打油一和：</span><span lang=\"EN-US\"><o:p></o:p></span></font></font></p>
<p><font size=\"4\"><font color=\"#800000\"><strong><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana\">    网络休言似蜃楼，行吟最喜结良俦。</span><span lang=\"EN-US\"><o:p></o:p></span></strong></font></font></p>
<p><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Verdana; mso-hansi-font-family: Verdana\"><font color=\"#800000\" size=\"4\"><strong>    诗中若有真情在，粗服蓬头不必羞。</strong></font></span><span lang=\"EN-US\"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
作者: 馨月    时间: 2010-4-15 11:31
学习老师佳作。



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