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作者: 知极斋主    时间: 2010-4-15 07:56
标题: 七律 咏草芽
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<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">咏草芽</span></p>
<p><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体" XMLANG="EN-US">2010</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">年<span lang="EN-US" XMLANG="EN-US">3</span>曰<span lang="EN-US" XMLANG="EN-US">28</span>日登北垛山得句</span></p></span>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 18.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold"></span> </p>
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<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 18.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold">数点<b>新</b>芽破土出，耐寒争得早春蕤。</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 18.0pt; mso-bidi-font-weight: bold">呼催同伴快苏醒，化作青山身上衣。<span lang="EN-US" XMLANG="EN-US"> </span></span></p>

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作者: 风清骨峻    时间: 2010-4-16 16:19
绝句，打错字了。  三仄尾，直白了。

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作者: 司马长风    时间: 2010-4-16 19:13
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>风清骨峻</i>在2010-4-16 16:19:27的发言：</b><br/>绝句，打错字了。  三仄尾，直白了。 </div>
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"4\">同感。意思还是很不错的。</font></p>

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