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标题: [原创]《凤凰台上忆吹箫》*春忆 [打印本页]

作者: 溪塘过雪 时间: 2010-4-29 22:37
标题: [原创]《凤凰台上忆吹箫》*春忆
<p align="center"><font face="仿宋_GB2312" color="#000000" size="4"><strong>《凤凰台上忆吹箫》*春忆</strong></font></p>
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<p align="center"><font face="仿宋_GB2312" color="#000000" size="4"><strong>文/溪塘过雪</strong></font></p>
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<p align="center"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#000000" size="4"><strong>山没残阳，风欺衰柳，孤城望断凉州。</strong></font></p>
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<p align="center"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#000000" size="4"><strong>奈夜光杯酒，饮尽春愁。</strong></font></p>
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<p align="center"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#000000" size="4"><strong>又叹玉门不度，依旧是、惆怅难收。</strong></font></p>
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<p align="center"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#000000" size="4"><strong>无凭处，书前乱笔，案侧凝眸。</strong></font></p>
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<p align="center"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#000000" size="4"><strong>神游。去年此际，两地里云笺，魂系兰舟。</strong></font></p>
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<p align="center"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#000000" size="4"><strong>渐飞鸿踪渺，黄鹤声休。</strong></font></p>
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<p align="center"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#000000" size="4"><strong>待到香消茶冷，才料得、江水东流。</strong></font></p>
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<p align="center"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#000000" size="4"><strong>今谁在？多情笑我，心似寒秋。</strong></font></p>

作者: 悟之山房 时间: 2010-4-29 23:50
溪塘过雪词力不凡……全篇字浅意真，不露痕迹；文从笔顺，句句珠玑。赏读，祝好！

作者: 一行白鹭 时间: 2010-5-3 13:46
词读的不多，今读到楼主的词，甚是喜欢。

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