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山居四首
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作者:
逍遥庄
时间:
2009-7-21 23:46
标题:
山居四首
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<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; COLOR: #000099; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold">其一</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; COLOR: #000099; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr>居对青山常自赏</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; COLOR: #000099; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr>临窗已闻野花香</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; COLOR: #000099; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr>未知天际云雨意</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; COLOR: #000099; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr>先觉山间凉风爽</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; COLOR: #000099; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr>其二</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; COLOR: #000099; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr>梦中隐闻鸡犬叫</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; COLOR: #000099; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr>醒来静听虫鸟鸣</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; COLOR: #000099; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr>帘启青山满目翠</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; COLOR: #000099; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr>窗开松坡迎面风</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; COLOR: #000099; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr>其三</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; COLOR: #000099; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr>断续风吹零星雨</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; COLOR: #000099; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr>夕照万木苍如洗</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; COLOR: #000099; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr>霞遮晚阳缝隙出</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; COLOR: #000099; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr>虹映暮雁天边去</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; COLOR: #000099; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr>其四</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; COLOR: #000099; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr>适闲信步上亭台</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; COLOR: #000099; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr>明月清风半开怀</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; COLOR: #000099; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr>漫姿撩情映眼过</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; COLOR: #000099; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr>轻歌销魂入耳来</span><wbr></span><wbr></div><!--v:3.2--></div>
作者:
朗州秋雨
时间:
2009-7-25 13:35
好清幽的意境。欣赏。
作者:
消遥庄
时间:
2009-7-25 19:07
感谢惠顾，请多指教。
作者:
朗州秋雨
时间:
2009-7-25 20:27
其一，其三，平仄互叶了。可以改一下。
作者:
消遥庄
时间:
2009-7-27 15:07
<p>请兄台斧正。谢谢了！</p>
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