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『原创』七律《春雨漫兴》（辘轳体）
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作者:
南英风
时间:
2010-5-9 20:19
标题:
『原创』七律《春雨漫兴》（辘轳体）
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" center? TEXT-ALIGN: char; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><strong><font color="#008000"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?; New? Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: new="New"><font color="#ff0000">江上平芜望欲迷</font>，远山含黛竞高低。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"></span></font></strong></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" center? TEXT-ALIGN: char; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><strong><font color="#008000"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?; New? Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: new="New">烟岚袅袅封前路，春雨潺潺涨小溪。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"></span></font></strong></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" center? TEXT-ALIGN: char; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><strong><font color="#008000"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?; New? Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: new="New">槛外嫣红桃蕊绽，林间苍翠鸟声啼。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"></span></font></strong></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" center? TEXT-ALIGN: char; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><strong><font color="#008000"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?; New? Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: new="New">苍茫四野浑如画，水墨丹青任品题。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"></span></font></strong></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" center? TEXT-ALIGN: char; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><font face="Times new=" color="#008000" New? Roman?><strong> </strong></font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" center? TEXT-ALIGN: char; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><strong><font color="#008000"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?; New? Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: new="New">春回又见草萋萋，<font color="#ff0000">江上平芜望欲迷</font>。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"></span></font></strong></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" center? TEXT-ALIGN: char; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><strong><font color="#008000"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?; New? Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: new="New">拔节青禾滋好雨，恋家旧燕垒新泥。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"></span></font></strong></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" center? TEXT-ALIGN: char; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><strong><font color="#008000"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?; New? Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: new="New">轻风漫拂黄莺树，白鹭纷飞绿柳堤。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"></span></font></strong></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" center? TEXT-ALIGN: char; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><strong><font color="#008000"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?; New? Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: new="New">得趣?翁篙一点，扁舟载酒任东西。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"></span></font></strong></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" center? TEXT-ALIGN: char; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><font face="Times new=" color="#008000" New? Roman?><strong> </strong></font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" center? TEXT-ALIGN: char; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><strong><font color="#008000"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?; New? Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: new="New">布谷催春自在啼，东君又到小园西。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"></span></font></strong></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" center? TEXT-ALIGN: char; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><strong><font color="#008000"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?; New? Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: new="New">风中浓雾驱难散，<font color="#ff0000">江上平芜望欲迷</font>。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"></span></font></strong></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" center? TEXT-ALIGN: char; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><strong><font color="#008000"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?; New? Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: new="New">雨过林霏清石气，岚封山色入诗题。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"></span></font></strong></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" center? TEXT-ALIGN: char; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><strong><font color="#008000"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?; New? Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: new="New">檐前昨夜声嘀嗒，瓣瓣桃红染一溪。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"></span></font></strong></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" center? TEXT-ALIGN: char; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><font face="Times new=" color="#008000" New? Roman?><strong> </strong></font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" center? TEXT-ALIGN: char; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><strong><font color="#008000"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?; New? Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: new="New">阴云密布压山低，摇曳林梢鹊鸟栖。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"></span></font></strong></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" center? TEXT-ALIGN: char; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><strong><font color="#008000"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?; New? Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: new="New">谷雨无私滋垄亩，农时不误促牛蹄。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"></span></font></strong></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" center? TEXT-ALIGN: char; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><strong><font color="#008000"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?; New? Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: new="New">陌头野卉闻先醉，<font color="#ff0000">江上平芜望欲迷</font>。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"></span></font></strong></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" center? TEXT-ALIGN: char; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><strong><font color="#008000"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?; New? Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: new="New">一响春雷苏万物，连天草树绿初齐。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"></span></font></strong></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" center? TEXT-ALIGN: char; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"><font face="Times new=" color="#008000" New? Roman?><strong> </strong></font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" center? TEXT-ALIGN: char; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><strong><font color="#008000"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?; New? Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: new="New">一树梅花香满闺，莺声婉啭入云霓。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"></span></font></strong></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" center? TEXT-ALIGN: char; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><strong><font color="#008000"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?; New? Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: new="New">山峦绿染三春色，油菜黄披十里畦。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"></span></font></strong></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" center? TEXT-ALIGN: char; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><strong><font color="#008000"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?; New? Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: new="New">偷得闲情诗敢赋，抛开俗虑酒须携。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"></span></font></strong></p>
<p style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" center? TEXT-ALIGN: char; LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><strong><font color="#008000"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" Roman?; New? Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: new="New">乱丝飘洒乌蓬顶，<font color="#ff0000">江上平芜望欲迷</font>。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt"></span></font></strong></p>
[此贴子已经被锄月花樵于2010-5-10 15:48:47编辑过]
作者:
司马长风
时间:
2010-5-9 20:51
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">五律皆可赏，芊绵清丽，曼妙多姿。</font></p>
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">其一、三、四尤佳。其二，“燕、莺、鹭”同聚一首，个感略多。其五，前咏之桃开复谢，此处“梅花”尚飘香，似不妥，“江上”句作结也觉稍隔。</font></p>
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">所议不知确否，敬请教正。</font></p>
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">拟飘红。</font></p>
作者:
南英风
时间:
2010-5-9 21:02
谢谢司马斑竹指教！
作者:
一行白鹭
时间:
2010-5-10 13:51
欣赏一组好辘轳。
作者:
南英风
时间:
2010-5-10 14:09
<font size=\"5\"><strong>谢谢欣赏！请多指教！</strong></font>
作者:
锄月花樵
时间:
2010-5-10 15:48
锦轮绣毂，其中不乏佳句，以状景拟象见胜，支持飘红！
作者:
南英风
时间:
2010-5-10 17:11
<p><strong><font color=\"#800000\" size=\"4\">谢谢<font face=\"Verdana\">锄月花樵</font>斑竹雅评！请多砸砖！</font></strong></p>
作者:
日凿一窍
时间:
2010-5-11 22:48
<p><strong><font color=\"#008000\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\" new=\"New\" mso-hansi-font-family: ?Times Roman?? New? Roman?;>得趣?翁篙一点，扁舟载酒任东西。</span><span lang=\"EN-US\" style=\"FONT-SIZE: 14pt\"></span></font></strong></p>
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<p>真个好句。</p>
<p> </p>
<p>支持飘红</p>
作者:
南英风
时间:
2010-5-12 08:19
<font size=\"4\"><strong>谢谢雅评！</strong></font>
作者:
浪中行吟
时间:
2010-5-12 15:29
提赏！
作者:
南英风
时间:
2010-5-15 18:01
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>浪中行吟</i>在2010-5-12 15:29:50的发言：</b><br/>提赏！ </div>
<p>谢谢欣赏！欢迎砸砖！</p>
作者:
雪落无声
时间:
2010-5-16 08:44
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