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标题: [原创]七律二首游莫干山 [打印本页]

作者: 一剪梅 时间: 2010-5-17 16:43
标题: [原创]七律二首游莫干山
<p align="center"><font size="4"><strong><font color="#1b24ff">    七律二首 <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 游莫干山</font> </strong></font></p>
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<p align="center"><font color="#1b24ff"><font size="4"><strong> </strong> <font color="#333300"> 雾中行</font></font></font></p>
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<p align="center"><font style="FONT-SIZE: 24px" color="#333300"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr>  <wbr>门开白马占眠床，鸟语催游个个乡。</font></p>
<p align="center"><font color="#333300" size="5"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 似幔似纱缠步缓，化珠化露吻腮凉。</font></p>
<p align="center"><font style="FONT-SIZE: 24px" color="#333300"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 平平仄仄探香径，浅浅深深入碧篁。</font></p>
<p align="center"><font color="#333300" size="5"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr>  <wbr>一路淙淙溪不见，源泉自在竹根藏。</font></p>
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<p align="center"><font style="FONT-SIZE: 32px" color="#333300" size="4"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr><wbr><wbr><wbr><wbr><wbr><wbr><wbr>剑龙瀑</font></p>
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<p align="center"><font style="FONT-SIZE: 24px" color="#333300" size="4"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 不散雾烟千载浓，山间?过冶金宗。</font></p>
<p align="center"><font color="#333300" size="4"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr><font size="5"> <wbr> 炼炉无迹忆熔炽，磨石有形知刃凶。</font></font></p>
<p align="center"><font color="#333300" size="5"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 伉俪精魂凝翠竹，雌雄宝剑化银龙。</font></p>
<p align="center"><font color="#333300" size="5"> <wbr>          <wbr>又成瀑布折三叠，玉碎要消世上烽！</font></p>

[此贴子已经被一行白鹭于2010-5-17 18:57:14编辑过]

作者: 一行白鹭 时间: 2010-5-17 18:58
“一路淙淙溪不见，源泉自在竹根藏。”好句。

作者: 司马长风 时间: 2010-5-17 19:41
<font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">《雾中行》首句形象新颖，五句“平平仄仄”扎眼。观全篇，似为雾中观竹，个个、篁、竹，皆同一意象，篁、竹应隐，而应于题中点出。<br/>《剑龙瀑》写其历史、地理、掌故，“剑”字不宜直出。剑之道，无招胜有招；诗之道，无形胜有形。</font>

作者: 锄月花樵 时间: 2010-5-18 18:46
其一赏结联，其二赏颔联，皆得理趣。

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