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标题: （原创）七律?题【秦淮夜色图】（平水韵?六麻） [打印本页]

作者: 柳浪闻莺 时间: 2010-6-5 09:27
标题: （原创）七律?题【秦淮夜色图】（平水韵?六麻）
<div><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: navy" xmllang="EN-US"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: navy; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" roman?? new="new" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: roman?; new?>（原创）七律?题【秦淮夜色图】（平水韵?六麻）</span> </span>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 133pt; mso-char-indent-count: 9.5"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: navy; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" roman?? new="new" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: roman?; new?>文</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: navy" xmllang="EN-US">/</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: navy; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" roman?? new="new" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: roman?; new?>闻英</span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 49pt; mso-char-indent-count: 3.5"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: navy; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" roman?? new="new" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: roman?; new?>钱塘水暖月初华，渔火江风入万家。</span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 49pt; mso-char-indent-count: 3.5"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: navy; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" roman?? new="new" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: roman?; new?>楚馆莺迷前殿柳，秦楼蝶恋后庭花。</span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 49pt; mso-char-indent-count: 3.5"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: navy; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" roman?? new="new" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: roman?; new?>金陵几度观朝雾，铁锁何曾见暮鸦。</span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 49pt; mso-char-indent-count: 3.5"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: navy; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" roman?? new="new" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: roman?; new?>暂且兰舟听故事，兴亡岂得怨琵琶。</span></p></div>

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作者: 苇雨一笑 时间: 2010-6-5 10:49
<p style=\"TEXT-INDENT: 49pt; mso-char-indent-count: 3.5\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: navy; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\"\'\"\" roman?? new=\"new\" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: roman?; new?>暂且兰舟听故事，兴亡岂得怨琵琶。</span></p>
<p style=\"TEXT-INDENT: 49pt; mso-char-indent-count: 3.5\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: navy; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\"\'\"\" roman?? new=\"new\" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: roman?; new?>警句。建议精华。</span></p>

作者: 白雪仙子 时间: 2010-6-5 11:47
确实是好诗！

作者: 柳浪闻莺 时间: 2010-6-6 00:01
<p>谢谢苇雨一笑老师点评，问好！周末快乐！</p>

作者: 老翅江湖 时间: 2010-6-6 00:04
<span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: navy; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\" roman?? new=\"new\" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: roman?; new?>楚馆莺迷前殿柳，秦楼蝶恋后庭花。喜欢这句，欣赏好律，支持推精。。。<img src=\"images/post/smile/dvbbs/em63.gif\" /></span>

作者: 柳浪闻莺 时间: 2010-6-6 00:05
谢谢白雪仙子版主鼓励，问好亲，周末快乐！

作者: 司马长风 时间: 2010-6-6 00:13
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">中二联工稳可赏，“渔火江风入万家”、“暂且兰舟”似应再酌。</font></p>
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">先飘红。<br/></font></p>

作者: 柳浪闻莺 时间: 2010-6-6 00:19
谢谢老翅江湖，司马长风老师点评鼓励，问好！周末快乐！

作者: 紫嫣郡主 时间: 2010-6-6 00:50
楚馆莺迷前殿柳，秦楼蝶恋后庭花。<img src=\"images/post/smile/dvbbs/em23.gif\" />问好闻莺！<br/>

作者: 柳浪闻莺 时间: 2010-6-6 02:26
谢谢紫鄢亲，问候郡主好！周末快乐！

作者: 锄月花樵 时间: 2010-6-9 15:22
精警有深致，推精！

作者: 白雪仙子 时间: 2010-7-21 19:44
提赏！

作者: 土烟斗 时间: 2011-1-20 10:31
欣赏精品。

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