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作者: 寒冰    时间: 2010-6-22 22:51
标题: [原创]满江红 问天
<font face="黑体" size="3">    农历庚寅年三月初四辰,观新闻玉树事,伤亡逾千,愤然有感!</font>
<p class="p0" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">    老子何曾,</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">仗剑里、</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">徒生幽咽?</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">恨只是,</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">江山如画,</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">画成悲切。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">不见春风开玉树,</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">犹闻鼓泣天山雪。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">到如今怒字满胸头,</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">劈山裂。    </span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">哀曲罢,</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">悲歌彻。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">栏杆断,</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">龙泉折。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">问帝都仙府,</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">此般堪悦?凡世只言天上好</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">,</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">灵霄不管人间别。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">更残垣之下有哭声,声声</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">血!</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-comfficeffice" /><o:p></o:p></span></p><img id="paperPicArea1" style="DISPLAY: none; POSITION: relative; TOP: auto" src="http://ctc.qzs.qq.com/ac/b.gif"/>
作者: 悟之山房    时间: 2010-6-23 22:07
情深声切。“<span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: \'楷体_GB2312\'; mso-spacerun: \'yes\'\">不见春风开玉树,</span><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: \'楷体_GB2312\'; mso-spacerun: \'yes\'\">犹闻鼓泣天山雪</span>”,此处最好用对偶句。问好,楼主!
作者: 寒冰    时间: 2010-6-23 23:34
问候。谢谢。




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