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标题: [原创]【西河】?花待雨 [打印本页]

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作者: 潇湘词    时间: 2010-7-4 20:42
标题: [原创]【西河】?花待雨
  
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">【西河】?花待雨<span lang="EN-US"> <?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-comfficeffice" /><o:p></o:p></span></span></b></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-INDENT: 52.5pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-char-indent-count: 5.0" align="left"><?xml:namespace prefix = st1 ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-comffice:smarttags" /><st1:chsdate w:st="on" year="2010" M="M"  day="4" islunardate="False" isrocdate="False"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体">2010</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体">年<span lang="EN-US">7</span>月<span lang="EN-US">4</span>日</span></st1:chsdate><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体">于渝<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">花待<b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="COLOR: blue">雨</span></b>，心思婉转如<b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="COLOR: blue">许</span></b>。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">争知五月奈何天、赤乌拱<b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="COLOR: blue">踞</span></b>。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">几番酷热慢煎熬，观音桥畔羁<b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="COLOR: blue">旅</span></b>。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">渐澄净，无甚<b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="COLOR: blue">语</span></b>，故楼旧地伤<b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="COLOR: blue">虑</span></b>。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">池塘柳树两年枝，是谁断<b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="COLOR: blue">取</span></b>？<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">那时李杏正迟迟，穿空多少飞<b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="COLOR: blue">絮</span></b>？<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">既然要去且任<b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="COLOR: blue">去</span></b>。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">到生疏、无毁无<b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="COLOR: blue">誉</span></b>。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">枉我素笺新<b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="COLOR: blue">句</span></b>，竟将她误作知音相<b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="COLOR: blue">予</span></b>。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">云起风生何堪<b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="COLOR: blue">遇</span></b>？！</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto" align="left"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体">《碧鸡漫志》卷五引《脞说》：“<u>大历</u>初，有乐工取古《西河长命女》加减节奏，颇有新声。”又称：“《大石调?西河慢》声犯正平，极奇古。”《清真集》入“大石”，当即此曲。一百五字，分三段，第一、二段各四仄韵，第三段五仄韵。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体">【定格】<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体">平仄<b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="COLOR: blue">仄</span></b>（韵），平平仄仄平<b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="COLOR: blue">仄</span></b>（韵）。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体">平平仄仄仄平平，仄平仄<b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="COLOR: blue">仄</span></b>（韵）。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体">仄平仄仄仄平平，平平平仄平<b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="COLOR: blue">仄</span></b>（韵）。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体">仄平仄，平仄<b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="COLOR: blue">仄</span></b>（韵），仄平仄仄平<b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="COLOR: blue">仄</span></b>（韵）。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体">平平仄仄仄平平，仄平仄<b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="COLOR: blue">仄</span></b>（韵）。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体">仄平仄仄仄平平，平平平仄平<b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="COLOR: blue">仄</span></b>（韵）。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体">仄平仄仄仄仄<b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="COLOR: blue">仄</span></b>（韵）。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体">仄平平、平仄平<b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="COLOR: blue">仄</span></b>（韵）。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体">仄仄仄平平<b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="COLOR: blue">仄</span></b>（韵），仄平平仄仄平平平<b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="COLOR: blue">仄</span></b>（韵）。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体">平仄平平平平<b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="COLOR: blue">仄</span></b>（韵）。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>

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作者: 浪中行吟    时间: 2010-7-8 20:30
此调多用入声韵。欣赏委婉好词，一二阙尤喜，问好!

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作者: 潇湘词    时间: 2011-8-22 21:59
标题: 回 1楼(浪中行吟) 的帖子
欢迎坛主惠临。问好。

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作者: 一阳居士    时间: 2011-8-23 09:54
欣赏佳作，问候潇湘！

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