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标题:
读范局《旅痕无垠》有作（新韵）
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作者:
寒江孤篷
时间:
2010-7-10 10:16
标题:
读范局《旅痕无垠》有作（新韵）
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作者:
紫嫣郡主
时间:
2010-7-10 11:21
<font size=\"3\">惜无利刃割时弊，总有丹心入画图。欣赏！</font><br/>
作者:
司马长风
时间:
2010-7-10 22:05
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">“浴情笃”略感不妥。</font></p>
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">题外话：以“无垠”形容“旅痕”亦不妥。</font></p>
作者:
白雪仙子
时间:
2010-7-11 17:22
转结有味！欣赏！
作者:
荣西安
时间:
2010-7-13 10:02
<p>结联问句，意境深远。</p>
<p>问好诗友，握手！</p>
作者:
寒江孤篷
时间:
2010-7-14 17:03
谢谢郡主鼓励！
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