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[原创]一肩香雪落梅花
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淡若花痕
时间:
2010-8-15 23:15
标题:
[原创]一肩香雪落梅花
<center><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc66ff" size="4">(一）</font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></center>
<center><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc66ff" size="4">一肩香雪落梅花，轻捻心思入碧笳。</font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></center>
<center><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc66ff" size="4">枕石寒衣空照月，倚栏孑影自烹茶。<br/></center></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">
<center><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc66ff" size="4">朝参暮谒怜风雅，斗转星移感物华。</font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></center>
<center><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc66ff" size="4">欲</font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc66ff" size="4">拟文章书缱绻，浅斟杯酒话桑麻。</font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></center><br/>
<center><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc66ff" size="4">（二）</font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></center>
<center><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc66ff" size="4">帘卷西风散绮霞，一肩香雪落梅花。</font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></center>
<center><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc66ff" size="4">神游故里愁肠断，影入空菱素鬓斜。</font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></center>
<center><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc66ff" size="4"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc66ff" size="4">浊酒几杯眈客念，寒霜数点冷胡笳</font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">。</font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></center>
<center><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc66ff" size="4">十年相思浑如梦，雁断衡阳往事嗟。</font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></center>
<center><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc66ff" size="4">（三）</font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></center>
<center><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc66ff" size="4">烟笼寒水月笼纱，写意丹青雅兴赊。</font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></center>
<center><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc66ff" size="4">数阕清辞寒篆笔，一肩香雪落梅花。</font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></center>
<center><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc66ff" size="4">借醪独醉思幽客，顾影空怜念韶华。</font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></center>
<center><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc66ff" size="4">往事</font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc66ff" size="4">依稀辉照里，轻愁不胜向尘涯。</font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></center>
<center><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc66ff" size="4">（四)</font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></center>
<center><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc66ff" size="4">独坐屏前忆韶华，半明寒月半窗纱。</font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></center>
<center><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc66ff" size="4">吟章遣兴激情起，泼墨抒怀倦意加。</font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></center>
<center><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc66ff" size="4">几缕愁思涂寂寞，一肩香雪落梅花。</font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></center>
<center><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc66ff" size="4">浮云往事随烟远，数阕高歌漫入茶。</font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></center>
<center><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face="楷体_GB2312"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" size="4"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" color="#cc66ff">（五）</font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></center>
<center><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face="楷体_GB2312"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" size="4"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" color="#cc66ff">当年空月几繁华？煮酒青梅醉凤琶。</font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></center>
<center><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face="楷体_GB2312"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" size="4"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" color="#cc66ff">别境流芳烟水阔，清妍入画柯枝斜。</font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></center>
<center><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face="楷体_GB2312"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" size="4"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" color="#cc66ff">曾潜笔彩诗心苦，已阻蓬山蝶梦遐。</font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></center>
<center><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face="楷体_GB2312"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" size="4"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" color="#cc66ff">怅立风中愁自绾，一肩香雪落梅花。</font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face="楷体_GB2312"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" size="4"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" color="#cc66ff"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" color="#000000"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face="楷体_GB2312" color="#cc66ff" size="4"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" color="#000000" size="3"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" color="#800080"><font style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" color="#000000"><br/></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></font><wbr style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></center>
作者:
紫嫣郡主
时间:
2010-8-16 00:04
欣赏！问好<font face=\"Verdana\" color=\"#61b713\"><b>淡若花痕</b></font>！
作者:
河?山人
时间:
2010-8-16 01:32
问好楼主！佳句多多，值得学习。窃以为，还可以更好更精致一点，比如斗转与星移它有区别吗？这样写就空占字位了，而改对句势必修改出句，腾出来的字位又可以增加新的内涵。让每一个字位都落实到实处岂不是更好。
作者:
白雪仙子
时间:
2010-8-16 20:38
<p>一肩香雪落梅花-----很有意境的句轴！</p>
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<p>这组轱辘拓得很开，但未得句轴之味，格律也多有疏漏！</p>
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作者:
又是秋色
时间:
2010-8-16 21:19
一肩香雪落梅花。好轴句！！欣赏一组佳作。问好！
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