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标题: [原创] 依恋 [打印本页]

作者: 云中一鹤 时间: 2010-8-17 22:58
标题: [原创] 依恋
<span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">在蝶儿的环绕下</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">你说，你不做鲜花</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">愿做小草</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">于是，蝶儿遁去</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">天籁的声音响起</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">我说，我愿做沃土</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">落叶向我挥手</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">肥沃着我的肥沃</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">小草扎根沃土</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">沐风，吟雨</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">茂盛着你的茂盛</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">芊芊玉手摇落斜阳，星斗</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">鸟儿在空中歌唱</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">歌声震落草尖上的露珠</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">渗入沃土</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">你的手触及到了我的心脏</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">我的心在跳</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">你的手在抖</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">小草和沃土的依恋</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">永久，永久......</span><wbr> <img id="paperPicArea1" style="DISPLAY: none; POSITION: relative; TOP: auto" src="http://ctc.qzs.qq.com/ac/b.gif"/>
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作者: 半帆 时间: 2010-8-18 00:26
脉搏清晰，形象、生动、深刻。拟人喻事深入浅出，只有密不可分的“依恋”，才有生生不息，突出了“依恋”与存在的重大意义。剥去浮华见本质，此处“依恋”留下的绝非是想象空间，而是沉痛地思考空间！好诗！学习了

作者: 寒江孤篷 时间: 2010-8-18 12:55
依恋，或许是一种磁力线的切割

作者: 云中一鹤 时间: 2010-8-20 22:29
两位斑竹辛苦！

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