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作者: 顽石 时间: 2010-8-21 00:01
标题: 登嘉峪关
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<p class="p0" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold; FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">绿</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold; FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">洲春色阔</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold; FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">，</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold; FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">烈士梦</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold; FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">乡</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold; FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">还。</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold; FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="p0" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0pt; MARGIN-BOTTOM: 0pt"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold; FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">长<span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold; FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">慨凝眸</span></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold; FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">久，</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold; FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">余晖映大</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold; FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">关</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold; FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'">。</span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold; FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: '宋体'; mso-spacerun: 'yes'"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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[此贴子已经被作者于2010-8-22 14:26:16编辑过]

作者: 垒石 时间: 2010-8-21 07:29
起句合句堪赏。

作者: 西楼孤灯 时间: 2010-8-21 07:32
虎头蛇尾。望字是仄声吧？

作者: 司马长风 时间: 2010-8-26 11:27
<font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">望有两读，通。</font>

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