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标题: 苏幕遮 只为故人瘦 [打印本页]

作者: 消遥庄    时间: 2009-7-24 09:03
标题: 苏幕遮 只为故人瘦
<p align="center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; COLOR: #000066; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'"><strong>斜阳道,落叶厚</strong></span><wbr><wbr> </p>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; COLOR: #000066; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">漫步黄昏,漫步黄昏透</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; COLOR: #000066; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">碧水青山踏遍后</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; COLOR: #000066; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">谁牵皓腕,</span><wbr></span><wbr><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; COLOR: #000066; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">谁牵皓腕袖</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; COLOR: #000066; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">丹枫叶,南国豆</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; COLOR: #000066; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">相思血染,相思血染就</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; COLOR: #000066; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">幽人衣宽风中皱</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; COLOR: #000066; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">只为故人,只为故人瘦</span><wbr></span><wbr></div><!--v:3.2-->
[此贴子已经被作者于2009-07-24 09:05:11编辑过]

作者: 朗州秋雨    时间: 2009-7-25 21:20
逍遥这首很有韵味。欣赏。
作者: 逍遥庄    时间: 2009-10-10 16:05
<p>秋雨君佳节可有新作?</p>
作者: 秦楼公子    时间: 2009-10-10 21:56
<p>词不错,唯格律差些。</p>
作者: 逍遥庄    时间: 2009-10-13 16:04
<p>谢秦版主指点。</p>




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