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标题:
咏秋海棠
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作者:
观风禅
时间:
2010-10-25 16:21
标题:
咏秋海棠
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作者:
司马长风
时间:
2010-10-25 23:10
<font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">此亦步红楼原韵也。属对工稳，用词考究。秋海棠虽有多种，然以红色为多见，此专咏白海棠，题似应改。</font>
作者:
观风禅
时间:
2010-10-26 09:47
首版说的在理，应把题目改为咏白海棠！
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