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标题: 南乡子 [打印本页]

作者: 诗酒年华 时间: 2009-9-28 05:33
标题: 南乡子
南乡子<wbr><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18px; COLOR: #336600; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"> 怅绪绕心头,</span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18px; COLOR: #336600; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"> 独自凭栏上小楼.</span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18px; COLOR: #336600; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"> 身在异乡双处冷,</span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18px; COLOR: #336600; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"> 休休,</span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18px; COLOR: #336600; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"> 寂寞犹添静夜幽.</span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18px; COLOR: #336600; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"> 举目眺神州,</span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18px; COLOR: #336600; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"> 宇海星阑淡月愁.</span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18px; COLOR: #336600; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"> 无限情思云浩渺,</span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18px; COLOR: #336600; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"> 悠悠,</span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18px; COLOR: #336600; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"> 一曲心音越洋讴.</span><wbr></span><wbr><br/>

作者: 掬泡斋 时间: 2009-9-28 17:33
<p>上片似欠些烘托。<wbr></p>

作者: 诗酒年华 时间: 2009-9-29 12:51
标题: [原创]蝶恋花四美（新韵）
哈哈，谢谢

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