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标题: （原创）七律【无题】（平水韵八庚） [打印本页]
作者: 柳浪闻莺    时间: 2010-10-27 08:45
标题: （原创）七律【无题】（平水韵八庚）
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'"><font size="3">（原创）七律【无题】（平水韵八庚）</font></span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt"><font size="3"><font face="宋体">          文编/闻英</font> </font></span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'"><font size="3">莫笑文坛烂眼睛，梨花凋谢有羔荣。</font></span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'"><font size="3">官人巧取偷天誉，妓女虚怀薄幸名。</font></span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'"><font size="3">鲁迅如知悲半死，广平闻说叹三声。</font></span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'"><font size="3">风光笃信轮流转，或许他年我一惊。</font></span></p>
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<p><font size="3">荷魂梦影老师雅和二首：</font></p>
<p><font size="3"> 七律?有感于“羊羔体”诗获鲁迅文学奖    <br/> 众人瞠目羊羔体，闪烁诗坛璀璨星。<br/> 骚韵屈原羞比色，骈风司马绌相形。<br/> 鸭喉糙哑拼鹂嗓，雉尾招摇炫雀屏。<br/> 大雅堂前荣折桂，平添文苑一枝馨。</font></p>
<p><font size="3">                     （其二）</font></p>
<p><font size="3"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'"><font size="3">奇光闪烁耀星空，众人哗然瞠眼瞳。</font></span></font></p>
<p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'"><font size="3">离楚荒凉长睡冷，羊羔咩叫一鸣红。</font></span><span><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'"><font size="3">乌鸦枝上摹天籁，李鬼山头炫斧功。</font></span><span><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'"><font size="3">白水当茶须细品，虽无味道胜骚风。</font></span></p>
<p><font size="3"></font> </p>
<p><font size="3">荷魂梦影外一首：</font></p>
<p><font size="3">同感。<br/>鲁奖而今刮异风，羊羔咩叫耸闻听。<br/>他年开创流星体，雷动文坛我一惊。<br/>哈哈。</font></p>
<p><font size="3"></font> </p>
<p><font size="3">未名老师雅和：</font></p>
<p><font size="3">煮酒笑谈 ?和流星<br/>唐诗过万词千红，何曾闻的羊咩声？<br/>文坛几度兴风雨，回首漠然心震惊。<br/>夫子圣言今犹在，再续经典羡流星。<br/>不以物喜明心志，他日煮酒论英雄。<br/></font></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'"><font face="Arial" size="3"></font></span> </p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'"><font face="Arial" size="3">欣然看客老师雅和：</font></span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'"><font face="Arial" size="3">七律.和闻英：</font></span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'"><font face="Arial" size="3">不见诗情笔不耕，羊羔体嫩做调羹。</font></span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'"><font face="Arial" size="3">贪心无度充风雅，色胆难包觅宦情。</font></span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'"><font face="Arial" size="3">鲁迅因羞哭旧梦，太白索句问新卿。</font></span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'"><font face="Arial" size="3">文章自古德行事，偷取浮名赚笑声。</font></span></p>
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作者: 如琴可听    时间: 2010-10-27 10:14
梨花体也好，羊羔体也罢，我还是喜欢地地道道的平平仄仄。问好柳浪闻莺。
作者: 柳浪闻莺    时间: 2010-10-27 11:09
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>如琴可听</i>在2010-10-27 10:14:43的发言：</b><br/>梨花体也好，羊羔体也罢，我还是喜欢地地道道的平平仄仄。问好柳浪闻莺。 </div>
<p>同感，谢谢如琴老师，问好！</p>



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