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作者: 淮水渔翁    时间: 2010-11-2 17:40
标题: 秋香（五律）
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-line-height-rule: exactly" align="center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 1pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" New? Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; new="New">昨夜北风疾，新霜染桂芳。不知篱旧色，只见圃新妆。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; LETTER-SPACING: 1pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 21pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-line-height-rule: exactly" align="center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 1pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" New? Roman?? ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; new="New">花艳青山远，舟摇绿水香。折枝月下树，三笑醉琼浆。</span></p>
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[此贴子已经被作者于2010-11-4 5:43:31编辑过]

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作者: 青山依旧    时间: 2010-11-2 22:55
<p>有两个青字。</p>
<p>绿水香有点凑。</p>
<p>另，个人认为，对句中最好不要用与韵脚同韵的字，如“霜”字。（双声字或者俗定词组除外）。</p>

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作者: 淮水渔翁    时间: 2010-11-4 05:41
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>青山依旧</i>在2010-11-2 22:55:05的发言：</b><br/>
<p>有两个青字。</p>
<p>绿水香有点凑。</p>
<p>另，个人认为，对句中最好不要用与韵脚同韵的字，如“霜”字。（双声字或者俗定词组除外）。</p></div>
<p>谢谢指教，祝您健康快乐。</p>

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