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鹧鸪天
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作者:
姜子丹
时间:
2010-11-3 16:58
标题:
鹧鸪天
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">鹧鸪天 </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体"></span> </p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">水剪湘波夜未阑。</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">浓香著雨卧春丹。</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">几番次第连城漏，</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">一种朦胧各自寒。<span lang="EN-US"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体"></span> </p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">从别后，只相关。</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">佳期岁岁与谁欢？</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">人生若是长相忆，</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体">便作飘零也涅盘。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
作者:
姜子丹
时间:
2010-11-3 17:03
<p>申精求拍</p>
作者:
一阳居士
时间:
2010-11-5 10:34
感怀佳作，问候朋友！
作者:
梅影点点
时间:
2010-11-7 09:23
好词，稍觉丹字有些凑韵，费解了些！
[此贴子已经被作者于2010-11-7 9:24:17编辑过]
作者:
姜子丹
时间:
2010-11-27 23:09
<span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\" Roman\'; mso-bidi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\" Roman\'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\" Roman\'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA\">善病每逢春丹卧，长愁多向花前叹</span> ---王次回
作者:
砚浓
时间:
2010-11-28 00:25
<p>欣赏。</p>
<p>下片“<span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体\">从别后，只相关</span>”和晏几道的“<span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体\">从别后，忆相逢</span>”很像。不过，虽有大家的影子，我认为这里还是对仗才好。</p>
作者:
隔水伊人
时间:
2010-11-30 13:55
<p>几番次第连城漏，</p>
<p>一种朦胧各自寒。</p>
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