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标题: [原创]虞美人?秋荷 [打印本页]
作者: 玉笥山翁 时间: 2009-9-30 10:02
标题: [原创]虞美人?秋荷
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: purple; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: mso-bidi-font-family: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: new="New"><font color="#000000"><strong>碧衣重恼东池雨，薄恨加些许。</strong></font></span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: purple; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: mso-bidi-font-family: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: new="New"></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: purple; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: mso-bidi-font-family: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: new="New"><font color="#000000"><strong>春心犹作意中青，央着东风别弄恁无情。</strong></font></span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: purple; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: mso-bidi-font-family: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: new="New"></span> </p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: purple; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: mso-bidi-font-family: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: new="New"></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: purple; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: mso-bidi-font-family: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: new="New"><font color="#000000"><strong>芳姿岂自愁多病，笑对秋波镜。</strong></font></span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: purple; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: mso-bidi-font-family: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: new="New"></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: purple; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: mso-bidi-font-family: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: new="New"><font color="#000000"><strong>珠残也未失心丝，一缕柔情但遣玉人知。</strong></font></span> </p>
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[此贴子已经被紫嫣郡主于2009-10-01 00:03:07编辑过]
作者: 紫嫣郡主 时间: 2009-10-1 00:06
<p><font size=\"4\"><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: purple; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? AR-SA? mso-bidi-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-ansi-language: mso-bidi-font-family: 1.0pt; mso-font-kerning: new=\"New\"><font color=\"#000000\">一缕柔情但遣玉人知</font></span></font></p>
作者: 紫嫣郡主 时间: 2009-10-1 00:06
<font face=\"宋体\">问好山翁，祝双节快乐！</font>
作者: 一介白丁 时间: 2009-10-1 02:10
读了几遍，楞是找不到秋荷的影子。请恕我愚钝。如果说，“秋波镜”与“珠残”是作为秋荷的指代，那么这两词在全文中的地位也太弱了。
作者: 玉笥山翁 时间: 2009-10-1 09:45
呵呵，白丁所说极是，秋荷 残了，词中找不到！
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