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标题:
而立
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作者:
观风禅
时间:
2010-11-27 10:47
标题:
而立
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'">眼净心如月，梦醒人在床。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New" Roman'">鱼纹才看镜，更比去年长。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
作者:
司马长风
时间:
2010-11-27 23:54
<font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">而立可贺！<br/>三联皆对，前二联甚佳，“梦醒人在床”似凑对，且与“鸡舞三声剑”相悖。<br/>鱼纹比去年长，莫非夸张？<br/></font>
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