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标题: [原创]凤凰台上忆吹箫*近乡情怯 [打印本页]

作者: 萧萧易水寒    时间: 2010-12-6 08:54
标题: [原创]凤凰台上忆吹箫*近乡情怯
<p class="MsoNormal" 0cm="0cm" 0cm? 0pt?><font size="5"><font color="#333399"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="'"" Roman?? new="New" ?Times Roman?; New? mso-ascii-font-family:>凤凰台上忆吹箫</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times new=" New? Roman?>*</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="'"" Roman?? new="New" ?Times Roman?; New? mso-ascii-font-family:>近乡情怯</span></font></font></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 68.25pt" class="MsoNormal" 0pt; 0cm="0cm" 0cm? 6.5? mso-char-indent-count:><span lang="EN-US"><font color="#333399" size="5" face="Times new=" New? Roman?></font></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" 0cm="0cm" 0cm? 0pt?><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="'"" Roman?? new="New" ?Times Roman?; New? mso-ascii-font-family:><font color="#333399" size="5">听雨袭帘,弄筝乏味,最愁独守空楼。</font></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" 0cm="0cm" 0cm? 0pt?><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="'"" Roman?? new="New" ?Times Roman?; New? mso-ascii-font-family:><font color="#333399" size="5">任带宽容改,岁月难留。</font></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" 0cm="0cm" 0cm? 0pt?><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="'"" Roman?? new="New" ?Times Roman?; New? mso-ascii-font-family:><font color="#333399" size="5">生怕伤情触景,多少夜,泪对烛流。</font></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" 0cm="0cm" 0cm? 0pt?><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="'"" Roman?? new="New" ?Times Roman?; New? mso-ascii-font-family:><font color="#333399" size="5">梳妆厌,开奁数次,欲粉还休。</font></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" 0cm="0cm" 0cm? 0pt?><span lang="EN-US"><font color="#333399" size="5" face="Times new=" New? Roman?>***<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">       </span>***<span style="mso-spacerun: yes">       </span>***</font></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" 0cm="0cm" 0cm? 0pt?><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="'"" Roman?? new="New" ?Times Roman?; New? mso-ascii-font-family:><font color="#333399" size="5">南游,几番过往,</font></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" 0cm="0cm" 0cm? 0pt?><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="'"" Roman?? new="New" ?Times Roman?; New? mso-ascii-font-family:><font color="#333399" size="5">心怯怯无颜,旧地重游。</font></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" 0cm="0cm" 0cm? 0pt?><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="'"" Roman?? new="New" ?Times Roman?; New? mso-ascii-font-family:><font color="#333399" size="5">念赤檐陈损,垣断鸦啾。</font></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" 0cm="0cm" 0cm? 0pt?><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="'"" Roman?? new="New" ?Times Roman?; New? mso-ascii-font-family:><font color="#333399" size="5">又叹良人逐远,</font></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" 0cm="0cm" 0cm? 0pt?><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="'"" Roman?? new="New" ?Times Roman?; New? mso-ascii-font-family:><font color="#333399" size="5">台怅怅,萧索残幽。</font></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" 0cm="0cm" 0cm? 0pt?><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="'"" Roman?? new="New" ?Times Roman?; New? mso-ascii-font-family:><font color="#333399" size="5">吹箫处,寒霜败峦,正是悲秋。</font></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" 0cm="0cm" 0cm? 0pt?><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="'"" Roman?? new="New" ?Times Roman?; New? mso-ascii-font-family:></span> </p>
<p class="MsoNormal" 0cm="0cm" 0cm? 0pt?><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="'"" Roman?? new="New" ?Times Roman?; New? mso-ascii-font-family:>注:龙榆生词谱依中华新韵</span></p>
作者: 浪中行吟    时间: 2010-12-7 10:45
<span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times new=\" mso-ascii-font-family: New? Roman?; ?Times new=\"New\" Roman?? ???><font color=\"#333399\" size=\"5\">生怕伤情触景,多少夜,泪对烛流。</font></span>情不堪处。
作者: 水之心    时间: 2010-12-7 22:15
<p 0pt? 0cm? 0cm=\"0cm\"><font color=\"#333399\" size=\"5\">南游,几番过往,</font></p>
<p 0pt? 0cm? 0cm=\"0cm\"><font color=\"#333399\" size=\"5\">心怯怯无颜,旧地重游。</font></p>
<p 0pt? 0cm? 0cm=\"0cm\"><font color=\"#333399\" size=\"5\">念赤檐陈损,垣断鸦啾。</font></p>
<p 0pt? 0cm? 0cm=\"0cm\"><font color=\"#333399\" size=\"5\">又叹良人逐远,</font></p>
<p 0pt? 0cm? 0cm=\"0cm\"><font color=\"#333399\" size=\"5\">台怅怅,萧索残幽。</font></p>
<p 0pt? 0cm? 0cm=\"0cm\"><font color=\"#333399\" size=\"5\">吹箫处,寒霜败峦,正是悲秋。</font></p>
<p>喜欢下片</p>
作者: 梅影点点    时间: 2010-12-8 07:58
<p 0cm=\"0cm\" 0cm? 0pt?><font color=\"#333399\" size=\"5\">生怕伤情触景,多少夜,泪对烛流。</font></p>哀婉感伤!激赏佳作!
作者: 一阳居士    时间: 2010-12-8 11:05
结句凄婉,音韵流畅,好词!




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