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标题: [原创]九张机*聚散两依依 [打印本页]
作者: 萧萧易水寒    时间: 2010-12-9 11:39
标题: [原创]九张机*聚散两依依
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<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'"><font size="5"></font></span></p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'"><font size="5">一张机，</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'"><font size="5">一帘残梦赴辽西，猎风卷地沙如雪。</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal"><font size="5"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">胡笳幽怨</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New="New"  Roman">, </font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">吹寒清角</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New="New"  Roman">, </font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">朔气满征衣。</span></font></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-comfficeffice" /><o:p><font size="5" face="Times New="New"  Roman"> </font></o:p></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'"><font size="5">两张机，</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'"><font size="5">霜遮泪眼貌依稀，万般缱绻羞相问。</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'"><font size="5">旌旗猎猎，催征战鼓，惊梦自伤悲。</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p><font size="5" face="Times New="New"  Roman"> </font></o:p></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'"><font size="5">三张机，</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal"><font size="5"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">琵琶懒弄黛眉低，凤钗斜鬓帘休卷。</span><span class="c-c600001"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: ??; mso-hansi-font-family: ??; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><font color="#c60000">　</font></span></span></font></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'"><font size="5">香奁生垢，罗裙宽带，往事不堪追。</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p><font size="5" face="Times New="New"  Roman"> </font></o:p></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'"><font size="5">四张机，</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'"><font size="5">鸳鸯织就怯分飞，弯刀戎马边疆戍。</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'"><font size="5">千里诀绝，只形劳燕，从此两相离。</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p><font size="5" face="Times New="New"  Roman"> </font></o:p></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal"><font size="5"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">五张机，</span><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes"><font face="Times New="New"  Roman">  </font></span></span></font></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal"><font size="5"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">危楼最怕夜单栖，烛前垂泪孤无语。</span><span class="c-c600001"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: ??; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></font></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'"><font size="5">相思无计，牙床有悔，凄苦诉谁知。</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p><font size="5" face="Times New="New"  Roman"> </font></o:p></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal"><font size="5"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">六张机，</span><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes"><font face="Times New="New"  Roman">  </font></span></span></font></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'"><font size="5">三更漏尽五更随，小楼昨夜潇潇雨。</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal"><font size="5"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">残红乱点，阑珊春意，都是断肠诗。</span><span class="c-c600001"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: ??; mso-hansi-font-family: ??; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><font color="#c60000">　</font></span></span></font></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p><font size="5" face="Times New="New"  Roman"> </font></o:p></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal"><font size="5"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">七张机，</span><font face="Times New="New"  Roman"> </font></font></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'"><font size="5">斜依病榻叹悲凄，韶华逐水东流去。</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'"><font size="5">芳心依旧，朱颜渐改，花谢意迟迟。</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p><font size="5" face="Times New="New"  Roman"> </font></o:p></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal"><font size="5"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">八张机，</span><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes"><font face="Times New="New"  Roman">  </font></span></span></font></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal"><font size="5"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">吴蚕丝尽断梭机，锦鸿欲寄青鸾误。</span><span class="c-c600001"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: ??; mso-hansi-font-family: ??; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt"><font color="#c60000">　</font></span></span></font></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'"><font size="5">摇红烛影，何时共剪，无处问归期。</font></span></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal"><font size="5"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">九张机，</span><font face="Times New="New"  Roman"> </font></font></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal"><font size="5"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">空织华发九千丝，菱花镜里流年逝。</span><span class="c-c600001"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: ??; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></font></p>
<p style="MARGIN: 0cm="0cm"  0cm="0cm"  0pt" class="MsoNormal"><font size="5"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 0.4pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">香残莲藕，梧桐憔悴，</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New="New"  Roman'">几许试红衣。</span></font><span class="c-c600001"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: ??; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
作者: 思逸潇湘    时间: 2010-12-9 15:33
<p><font size=\"3\">朋友，格律怎么能错这么多呢，修改一下吧。</font></p>
<p><font size=\"3\"> </font></p>
<p><font size=\"3\">雪、问、卷、戍、语、雨、去、误，未押韵。</font></p>
<p><font color=\"#000000\"><font size=\"3\"><em style=\"COLOR: red\">幽</em> 、 <em style=\"COLOR: red\">霜</em> 、 <em style=\"COLOR: red\">旌</em> 、 <em style=\"COLOR: red\">斜</em> 、 <em style=\"COLOR: red\">生、</em> <em style=\"COLOR: red\">罗</em> ，<em style=\"COLOR: red\">丝</em> ，应仄</font></font></p>
<p><font color=\"#000000\"><font size=\"3\"><em style=\"COLOR: blue\">里</em> 、 <em style=\"COLOR: blue\">只</em> 、 <em style=\"COLOR: blue\">织</em> ，应平<br/><br/></font></font></p>
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作者: 水之心    时间: 2010-12-9 16:26
喜欢这个词牌，学习一下
作者: 萧萧易水寒    时间: 2010-12-9 17:33
<p style=\"MARGIN: 0cm=\"0cm\"  0cm=\"0cm\"  0pt\" class=\"MsoNormal\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'\"><font size=\"5\">潇版，是词谱不一样吧？我用的是这个谱：</font></span></p>
<p style=\"MARGIN: 0cm=\"0cm\"  0cm=\"0cm\"  0pt\" class=\"MsoNormal\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'\"><font size=\"5\"></font></span> </p>
<p style=\"MARGIN: 0cm=\"0cm\"  0cm=\"0cm\"  0pt\" class=\"MsoNormal\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'\"><font size=\"5\">中平平（韵），</font></span></p>
<p style=\"MARGIN: 0cm=\"0cm\"  0cm=\"0cm\"  0pt\" class=\"MsoNormal\"><font size=\"5\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'\">中平中仄仄平平，</span><span lang=\"EN-US\"><font face=\"Times New=\"New\"  Roman\">{</font></span><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'\">韵</span><span lang=\"EN-US\"><font face=\"Times New=\"New\"  Roman\">}</font></span></font></p>
<p style=\"MARGIN: 0cm=\"0cm\"  0cm=\"0cm\"  0pt\" class=\"MsoNormal\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'\"><font size=\"5\">中平中仄平平仄</font></span></p>
<p style=\"MARGIN: 0cm=\"0cm\"  0cm=\"0cm\"  0pt\" class=\"MsoNormal\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'\"><font size=\"5\">平平中仄</font></span></p>
<p style=\"MARGIN: 0cm=\"0cm\"  0cm=\"0cm\"  0pt\" class=\"MsoNormal\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'\"><font size=\"5\">中平中仄</font></span></p>
<p style=\"MARGIN: 0cm=\"0cm\"  0cm=\"0cm\"  0pt\" class=\"MsoNormal\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\"  Roman\'\"><font size=\"5\">中仄仄平平（韵）</font></span></p>
作者: 思逸潇湘    时间: 2010-12-10 18:59
<p>一般通用《钦定词谱》。问候易水寒！</p>
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<p>一??。?梭光景去如?。?芳夜永愁?寐。????。?成春恨。留著侍郎?。<br/>●○<font color=\"#ff6600\">○</font>　●○○●●○<font color=\"#ff6600\">○</font>　○○●●○○<font color=\"#3333ff\">●</font>?○○●●　●○○●　○●●○<font color=\"#ff6600\">○</font></p>
作者: 萧萧易水寒    时间: 2010-12-10 21:28
<font size=\"5\">谢谢潇版，马上回去改！</font>



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