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作者: 柳下雪 时间: 2010-12-10 11:18
标题: [原创]五律?听琴有感
月夜春江水，清寒渡久违。
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天溪帘雨注，陌路梦踪随。
稽首终难再，柳岸郁丝垂。

作者: 又是秋色 时间: 2010-12-10 13:51
莲花，似不稳。稽首终难再，柳岸郁丝垂。喜结。

作者: 明月诗心 时间: 2010-12-10 17:35
附议秋色版主。

作者: 柳下雪 时间: 2010-12-10 21:12
对不起各位诗友，该作失粘了，羞愧难当！暂作五古，赦我修改。

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