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标题: 七律和风雨落花轱辘体 [打印本页]

作者: 柳浪闻莺 时间: 2010-12-11 08:59
标题: 七律和风雨落花轱辘体
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">七律和风雨落花轱辘体：</span></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" align="left"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> 【揽尽相思骨里藏】</span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 35pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-char-indent-count: 2.5" align="left"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">揽尽相思骨里藏。秋声聊赖雁声长。</span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 35pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-char-indent-count: 2.5" align="left"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">年来赢得伤春病，岁去频忧晓月凉。</span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 35pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-char-indent-count: 2.5" align="left"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">雨夜何堪书锦字，霜天更著断人肠。</span></p>
<p style="TEXT-INDENT: 35pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-char-indent-count: 2.5" align="left"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">此情许是前生债，石上痴心恨未亡。</span></p>
<p style="MARGIN-LEFT: 35pt; TEXT-INDENT: -35pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan; mso-char-indent-count: -2.5" align="left"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: #003366; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">附?雨落花原玉：<span lang="EN-US" XML

ANG="EN-US"><br/></span>独上西楼月影长，急风欺病透心凉。<span lang="EN-US" XML

ANG="EN-US"><br/></span>弦音楚楚云垂泪，衣袂飘飘鹤断肠。<span lang="EN-US" XML

ANG="EN-US"><br/></span>愤世问天何不老，悲情斥地怎无亡。<span lang="EN-US" XML

ANG="EN-US"><br/></span>三生石畔三生悟，揽尽相思骨里藏。</span></p>

作者: 司马长风 时间: 2010-12-11 23:18
<font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">既是轱辘体，如何只一首？</font><br/>

作者: 又是秋色 时间: 2010-12-11 23:20
<p>低沉了些。个觉中两联，对句皆不如出句。</p>

作者: 落雁公主 时间: 2010-12-11 23:22
可能是轱辘之一吧呵呵

作者: 青山依旧 时间: 2010-12-12 16:15
楼主借句转了轱辘一格，

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