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标题: 七律?徐霞客家乡“草鞋夫妇相濡以沫70载”有感（飘红） [打印本页]
作者: 梧桐秋语    时间: 2010-12-15 00:50
标题: 七律?徐霞客家乡“草鞋夫妇相濡以沫70载”有感（飘红）
  
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><font size="4"><b><span style="COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: new="New" Roman?; New? 1.0pt? mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:>七律?徐霞客家乡“草鞋夫妇相濡以沫</span></b><b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Times new=" Roman?; New? 1.0pt? mso-font-kerning: black; COLOR:>70</span></b><b><span style="COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: new="New" Roman?; New? 1.0pt? mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:>载”有感</span></b><b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Times new=" Roman?; New? 1.0pt? mso-font-kerning: black; COLOR:><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-comfficeffice" /><o:p></o:p></span></b></font></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><font size="4"><b><span style="COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: new="New" Roman?; New? 1.0pt? mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:>梧桐秋语</span></b><b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Times new=" Roman?; New? 1.0pt? mso-font-kerning: black; COLOR:>/</span></b><b><span style="COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: new="New" Roman?; New? 1.0pt? mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:>文</span></b></font></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><b><span style="COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: new="New" Roman?; New? 1.0pt? mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:></span></b><b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Times new=" Roman?; New? 1.0pt? mso-font-kerning: black; COLOR:><o:p></o:p></span></b><font size="4"> </font></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><b><span style="COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: new="New" Roman?; New? 1.0pt? mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:><font size="4">寿藤老树历枯荣，相伴春秋一路行。</font></span></b></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><font size="4"><b><span style="COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: new="New" Roman?; New? 1.0pt? mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:>绳结烟霞追日月，魂牵草履度人生。</span></b><b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Times new=" Roman?; New? 1.0pt? mso-font-kerning: black; COLOR:><o:p></o:p></span></b></font></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><b><span style="COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: new="New" Roman?; New? 1.0pt? mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:><font size="4">寒风暮雨庭前绕，乱世红尘身外轻。</font></span></b></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><b><span style="COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: new="New" Roman?; New? 1.0pt? mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:><font size="4">天道酬勤凭巧手，编长足下水云程。</font></span></b><b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 'Times new=" Roman?; New? 1.0pt? mso-font-kerning: black; COLOR:><o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
[此贴子已经被司马长风于2010-12-16 23:27:25编辑过]
作者: 白雪仙子    时间: 2010-12-15 09:11
<p style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: center\" align=\"left\"><b><span style=\"COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: new=\"New\" Roman?; New? 1.0pt? mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:><font size=\"4\">天道酬勤凭巧手，编长足下水云程。</font></span></b></p>
<p style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: center\" align=\"left\"><b><span style=\"COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: new=\"New\" Roman?; New? 1.0pt? mso-font-kerning: mso-bidi-font-family:><font size=\"4\"></font></span></b><b><span lang=\"EN-US\" style=\"FONT-FAMILY: \'Times new=\" Roman?; New? 1.0pt? mso-font-kerning: black; COLOR:><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = \"urn:schemas-microsoft-comfficeffice\" /><o:p><font size=\"4\">贴切、意远，欣赏此联！</font></o:p></span></b></p>
作者: 如琴可听    时间: 2010-12-15 10:10
<p>93岁高龄的徐金宽老人和93岁的老伴姚金珍老人，相濡以沫七十载，他们用一手编草鞋的绝活撑起了一个家庭，更织就了一幅夕阳无限好的幸福图景。谢谢秋语君！欣赏佳作！</p>
作者: 梧桐秋语    时间: 2010-12-15 19:35
标题: [原创] 江城梅花引?雨夜思（新韵）
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>白雪仙子</i>在2010-12-15 9:11:52的发言：</b><br/>
<p style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: center\" align=\"left\"><b><span style=\"COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\" mso-font-kerning: Roman?; ?Times mso-bidi-font-family: mso-hansi-font-family: New? new=\"New\" 1.0pt?><font size=\"4\">天道酬勤凭巧手，编长足下水云程。</font></span></b></p>
<p style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: center\" align=\"left\"><b><span style=\"COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\" mso-font-kerning: Roman?; ?Times mso-bidi-font-family: mso-hansi-font-family: New? new=\"New\" 1.0pt?><font size=\"4\"></font></span></b><b><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: \'Times new=\" lang=\"EN-US\" mso-font-kerning: Roman?; New? 1.0pt? COLOR: black;><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = \"urn:schemas-microsoft-comfficeffice\" /><o:p><font size=\"4\">贴切、意远，欣赏此联！</font></o:p></span></b></p></div>
<p>呵呵，谢谢仙子版版鼓励。</p>
作者: 梧桐秋语    时间: 2010-12-15 19:37
标题: [原创] 江城梅花引?雨夜思（新韵）
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>如琴可听</i>在2010-12-15 10:10:57的发言：</b><br/>
<p>93岁高龄的徐金宽老人和93岁的老伴姚金珍老人，相濡以沫七十载，他们用一手编草鞋的绝活撑起了一个家庭，更织就了一幅夕阳无限好的幸福图景。谢谢秋语君！欣赏佳作！</p></div>
<p>谢谢如琴可听版版，问好！</p>
作者: 明月诗心    时间: 2010-12-15 20:38
<p style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: center\" align=\"center\"><b><span style=\"COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\" mso-bidi-font-family: mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt? New? Roman?; new=\"New\" mso-hansi-font-family: ?Times><font size=\"4\">寒风暮雨庭前绕，乱世红尘身外轻。</font></span></b></p>
<p style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: center\" align=\"center\"><b><span style=\"COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\" mso-bidi-font-family: mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt? New? Roman?; new=\"New\" mso-hansi-font-family: ?Times><font size=\"4\">天道酬勤凭巧手，编长足下水云程。</font></span></b></p>
<p style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: center\" align=\"center\"><b><span style=\"COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\" mso-bidi-font-family: mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt? New? Roman?; new=\"New\" mso-hansi-font-family: ?Times><font size=\"4\">巧手织出幸福路！</font></span></b></p>
作者: 梧桐秋语    时间: 2010-12-16 23:21
标题: [原创] 江城梅花引?雨夜思（新韵）
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>明月诗心</i>在2010-12-15 20:38:48的发言：</b><br/>
<p style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: center\" align=\"center\"><b><span style=\"COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\" mso-bidi-font-family: mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt? New? Roman?; new=\"New\" mso-hansi-font-family: ?Times><font size=\"4\">寒风暮雨庭前绕，乱世红尘身外轻。</font></span></b></p>
<p style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: center\" align=\"center\"><b><span style=\"COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\" mso-bidi-font-family: mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt? New? Roman?; new=\"New\" mso-hansi-font-family: ?Times><font size=\"4\">天道酬勤凭巧手，编长足下水云程。</font></span></b></p>
<p style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: center\" align=\"center\"><b><span style=\"COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\" mso-bidi-font-family: mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt? New? Roman?; new=\"New\" mso-hansi-font-family: ?Times><font size=\"4\">巧手织出幸福路！</font></span></b></p></div>
<p>谢谢明月诗心版主临帖，问好！</p>
作者: 司马长风    时间: 2010-12-16 23:26
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">其事可感，其诗可赏。首尾呼应甚佳，最赏尾联。颈联似可再酌。</font></p>
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">---飘红。</font></p>
作者: 谊之    时间: 2010-12-16 23:36
的确好！
作者: 梧桐秋语    时间: 2010-12-17 16:03
标题: [原创] 江城梅花引?雨夜思（新韵）
谢谢首版鼓励，问好！
作者: 梧桐秋语    时间: 2010-12-17 16:04
标题: [原创] 江城梅花引?雨夜思（新韵）
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>司马长风</i>在2010-12-16 23:26:55的发言：</b><br/>
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">其事可感，其诗可赏。首尾呼应甚佳，最赏尾联。颈联似可再酌。</font></p>
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">---飘红。</font></p></div>
<p>谢谢首版飘红鼓励，问好！</p>



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