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标题: 七律【秋吟】(一东) [打印本页]

作者: 柳浪闻莺    时间: 2010-12-15 12:34
标题: 七律【秋吟】(一东)
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" new="new" mso-hansi-font-family: new? roman?; ?Times roman??>七律【秋吟】(一东)</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" new="new" mso-hansi-font-family: new? roman?; ?Times roman??>放眼堪惊造化功,秋光毕竟总殊同。</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" new="new" mso-hansi-font-family: new? roman?; ?Times roman??>独凭征雁千帆远,一任闲云万壑空。</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" new="new" mso-hansi-font-family: new? roman?; ?Times roman??>鸟倦霜林怀旧绿,荷枯雨盖抱残红。</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" new="new" mso-hansi-font-family: new? roman?; ?Times roman??>逢君莫问家乡事,或恐蝉心不禁风。</span></p>
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作者: 明月诗心    时间: 2010-12-15 17:58
<p><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\"\'\"\" new? roman?; ?Times roman?? mso-hansi-font-family: new=\"new\">鸟倦霜林怀旧绿,荷枯雨盖抱残红。</span></p>
<p><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: blue; FONT-SIZE: 15pt; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\"\'\"\" new? roman?; ?Times roman?? mso-hansi-font-family: new=\"new\">逢君莫问家乡事,或恐蝉心不禁风。</span></p>
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<p>秋活了!</p>
作者: 又是秋色    时间: 2010-12-15 18:35
或恐蝉心不禁风。结好!莫问,个觉可酌。
作者: 柳浪闻莺    时间: 2010-12-15 19:36
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>明月诗心</i>在2010-12-15 17:58:29的发言:</b><br/>
<p><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\" new=\"new\" mso-hansi-font-family: new? roman?; ?Times roman?? ???>鸟倦霜林怀旧绿,荷枯雨盖抱残红。</span></p>
<p><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\" new=\"new\" mso-hansi-font-family: new? roman?; ?Times roman?? ???>逢君莫问家乡事,或恐蝉心不禁风。</span></p>
<p> </p>
<p>秋活了!</p></div>
<p> 谢谢明月版主点评,问好!</p>
作者: 柳浪闻莺    时间: 2010-12-15 19:39
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>又是秋色</i>在2010-12-15 18:35:32的发言:</b><br/>或恐蝉心不禁风。结好!莫问,个觉可酌。 </div>
<p> 谢谢又是秋色老师点评,我再斟酌一下。</p>




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