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作者: 叶秋    时间: 2010-12-20 19:53
标题: 七律 白云深处有人家
  
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作者: 诗酒当歌    时间: 2010-12-20 23:35
<p>喜首尾联。</p>
<p>中间的典故似乎多了点，用以引喻的地方稍显杂乱。</p>
<p>个见。</p>
作者: 又是秋色    时间: 2010-12-21 11:33
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>诗酒当歌</i>在2010-12-20 23:35:07的发言：</b><br/>
<p>喜首尾联。</p>
<p>中间的典故似乎多了点，用以引喻的地方稍显杂乱。</p>
<p>个见。</p></div>
<p>附议诗酒兄。问好叶秋版！</p>
作者: 明月诗心    时间: 2010-12-21 18:18
附议二位版主，典是多了点，不够清新自然。问好叶秋版主！
作者: 青山依旧    时间: 2010-12-22 23:13
<p>典多生隔。</p>
<p>最喜首联，问好首版。</p>



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