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标题: 七律 题荒山农家冬景 [打印本页]
作者: 叶秋    时间: 2010-12-20 19:56
标题: 七律 题荒山农家冬景

<p class="MsoNormal" style="LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: char; LINE-HEIGHT: 28.6pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-pagination: none" align="center"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: Gungsuh"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">       </span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: Gungsuh">荒疏野景</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: 新宋体">赖</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: Gungsuh">寒松，衰草枯</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: 新宋体">荆</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: Gungsuh">被雪封。<span lang="EN-US"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-comfficeffice" /><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: char; LINE-HEIGHT: 28.6pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-pagination: none" align="center"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: Gungsuh"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">       </span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: Gungsuh">土室新烟人取暖，木</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: 新宋体">栏旧</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: Gungsuh">址畜</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: 新宋体">趋</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: Gungsuh">空。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: char; LINE-HEIGHT: 28.6pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-pagination: none" align="center"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: Gungsuh"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">       </span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: 新宋体">华</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: Gungsuh">光不照</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: 新宋体">营</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: Gungsuh">生地，峡谷无</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: 新宋体">缘闹</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: Gungsuh">市通。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="LAYOUT-GRID-MODE: char; LINE-HEIGHT: 28.6pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; mso-pagination: none" align="center"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: Gungsuh"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes">       </span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: Gungsuh">莫道凄凉</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: 新宋体">难</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: Gungsuh">度日，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: 新宋体">严</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: Gungsuh">冬</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: 新宋体">历练</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: Gungsuh">待春</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: 新宋体">风</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: Gungsuh">。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
作者: 诗酒当歌    时间: 2010-12-20 23:14
<p>一派荒凉景象。</p>
<p>颈联稍宽了。</p>
<p>首联“赖”字略不稳。</p>
作者: 明月诗心    时间: 2010-12-21 18:41
<p><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: 新宋体\">严</span><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: Gungsuh\">冬</span><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: 新宋体\">历练</span><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: Gungsuh\">待春</span><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: 新宋体\">风</span><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: Gungsuh\">。<span lang=\"EN-US\"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = \"urn:schemas-microsoft-comfficeffice\" /><o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p>春风在心！</p>
作者: 司马长风    时间: 2010-12-22 00:01
<font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">冬天来了，春天还会远吗？欣赏叶秋兄大作。</font>
作者: 青山依旧    时间: 2010-12-22 23:30
说不定农家在这被雪封的冬天里自得其乐呢，哈哈，欣赏首版佳作。



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