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标题: [原创]八六子*叹断西楼 [打印本页]
作者: 萧萧易水寒 时间: 2010-12-26 09:06
标题: [原创]八六子*叹断西楼
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" 0cm? 0cm="0cm" 0pt?><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" New? new="New" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Roman??><font size="5">伫长汀，怨如春草，离离败而重生。</font></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" 0cm? 0cm="0cm" 0pt?><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" New? new="New" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Roman??><font size="5">怅远去红帆绿影，近来夕鼓晨钟，瑟阳水中。</font></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" 0cm? 0cm="0cm" 0pt?><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times new=" size="5" Roman? New?>***<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>***<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>***</font></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" 0cm? 0cm="0cm" 0pt?><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" New? new="New" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Roman??><font size="5">凭栏愁雨霖零，又逝咏春无数，抚琴腊酒新停。</font></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" 0cm? 0cm="0cm" 0pt?><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" New? new="New" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Roman??><font size="5">乱曲调、风情不知谁解，懒慵陈带，又添新瘦。</font></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" 0cm? 0cm="0cm" 0pt?><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" New? new="New" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Roman??><font size="5">更迭叹醒三帘旧梦，难平七转心惊。</font></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" 0cm? 0cm="0cm" 0pt?><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" New? new="New" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Roman??><font size="5">厌窗棂，徒增杜鹃几声。</font></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" 0cm? 0cm="0cm" 0pt?><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" New? new="New" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Roman??><font size="5"></font></span> </p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" 0cm? 0cm="0cm" 0pt?><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" New? new="New" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; Roman??><font size="5">注：龙榆生词谱依中华新韵</font></span></p>
[此贴子已经被梅影点点于2010-12-26 11:53:49编辑过]
作者: 梅影点点 时间: 2010-12-26 11:53
章法井然，开合有致，余味缭绕，飘红共赏！
作者: 一阳居士 时间: 2010-12-28 08:52
音韵流畅，清新飘逸，助推！
作者: 冷月斜窗 时间: 2010-12-29 22:25
<p>起头和少游的有点像啊，欣赏了</p>
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