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标题: [原创]/看云兄寄诗一首，步其韵和之/ [打印本页]

作者: 山红涧碧 时间: 2011-1-15 21:12
标题: [原创]/看云兄寄诗一首，步其韵和之/
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<p><font style="FONT-SIZE: 16px; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体">平明得看云兄诗一首，读之，甚生心思矣，次之以寄。</font></p>
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<p><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体"><font style="FONT-SIZE: 16px">与君有拟暗垂青，识面</font><font style="FONT-SIZE: 16px">江湖坐饮亭。几欲怀新赴荆楚，一如感旧入神经。</font></font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-SIZE: 16px; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">病行犹记千丝</font><font style="FONT-SIZE: 16px; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">雨，追忆谈何半点星！鹤去东西那复计，心襟唯重隔云听。</font></p>
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<p><font style="FONT-SIZE: 16px; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体">凭栏看云《中夜感赋呈山涧兄》：</font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-SIZE: 16px; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体">年前归返，尝与山涧兄有拟，相约抵鄂，小晤江城两女史，奈</font><font style="FONT-SIZE: 16px; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体">心事两烦，</font></p>
<p><font style="FONT-SIZE: 16px; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体">竟未成行，已多半年矣！中夜感赋有寄。<br/></font></p>
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<p><font style="FONT-SIZE: 16px; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体">袂约当初柳未青，而今荫翳覆长亭。期游黄鹤凭千古，团坐香茶话已经。<br/>别后音书无片段，梦中记忆尚零星。近来不敢寻名胜，山水入琴谁复听。</font></p>
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作者: 青山依旧 时间: 2011-1-16 12:51
<p><font face=\"Times New=\"New\" Roman\">好唱好和，欣赏！</font></p>

作者: 诗酒当歌 时间: 2011-1-17 14:07
<p>鹤去东西那复计，心襟唯重隔云听。</p>
<p>好结，呼应首联，犹见心情。</p>

作者: 山红涧碧 时间: 2011-1-17 21:48
谢楼上两位版主指评~

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