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标题: 七律?恭送金虎(新韵) [打印本页]

作者: 贾连凯 时间: 2011-1-21 19:06
标题: 七律?恭送金虎(新韵)
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[此贴子已经被作者于2011-1-22 15:56:09编辑过]

作者: 司马长风 时间: 2011-1-22 10:26
<font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">颈联“责”为入声，此联对稍不工，余皆佳。问好贾先生！</font>

作者: 贾连凯 时间: 2011-1-22 15:57
谢长风好友指点，不工之处，连凯再酌！

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