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七律?永远怀念人民的好总理
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作者:
非子若云
时间:
2011-1-30 10:56
标题:
七律?永远怀念人民的好总理
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<p><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA?> 恩来入世幸中华,天下唯公举世夸。</span></b></p>
<p><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA?> 险道挺身担道义,危船冲浪荡泥沙。</span></b></p>
<p><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA?> 无私碎骨千秋地,为仆掏心百姓家。</span></b></p>
<p><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new=" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: Roman?; New? new="New" mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA?> 绝代忠良昭青史,做官后辈脚休斜。</span></b></p></span></b>
[此贴子已经被作者于2011-2-15 22:00:04编辑过]
作者:
煮雨亭主
时间:
2011-1-30 11:33
永远怀念人民的好总理!
作者:
水之心
时间:
2011-1-30 18:09
绝代忠良昭青史,做官后辈脚休斜。
作者:
非子若云
时间:
2011-1-30 21:27
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>煮雨亭主</i>在2011-1-30 11:33:22的发言:</b><br/>永远怀念人民的好总理! </div>
<p>谢谢<strong><em>煮雨亭主垂赏!问好!</em></strong></p>
作者:
泰安山人
时间:
2011-1-31 20:56
一首好律 劲赏!
作者:
明月诗心
时间:
2011-1-31 22:34
绝代忠良昭青史,做官后辈脚休斜。高山仰止!
作者:
诗酒当歌
时间:
2011-1-31 22:52
<p>同怀念!</p>
<p>中二联三四字均为动宾结构,读来稍板,似可调整一下,这样读来音节更有韵致。</p>
<p>无私骨碎千秋地,为仆心掏百姓家。</p>
<p>妄议了。</p>
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