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标题: 七律?春日郊行 [打印本页]
作者: 木白    时间: 2011-2-24 11:54
标题: 七律?春日郊行
<font size="4"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #323e32; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: pMingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt" XMLANG="ZH-TW">?扉小院?苔?</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #323e32; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">，</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #323e32; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: pMingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt" XMLANG="ZH-TW">?物勾人?故?</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #323e32; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">。</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #323e32; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: pMingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt" XMLANG="ZH-TW">燕未??春已老</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #323e32; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">，</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #323e32; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: pMingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt" XMLANG="ZH-TW">花???砌生香</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #323e32; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">。</span> </span>
<p><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #323e32; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: pMingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt" XMLANG="ZH-TW"><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: pMingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW" XMLANG="ZH-TW">可??月?中?，??相思???</span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #323e32; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">。</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #323e32; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: pMingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt" XMLANG="ZH-TW">直到?昏都倚?</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #323e32; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">，</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #323e32; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: pMingLiU; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt" XMLANG="ZH-TW">不知?雨??裳</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #323e32; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt">。</span></p>
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[此贴子已经被作者于2011-3-2 12:28:43编辑过]
作者: 又是秋色    时间: 2011-2-24 20:16
燕未??春已老，花???砌生香。欣赏，问好。
作者: 木白    时间: 2011-2-28 12:59
谢谢欣赏，问好了
作者: 文若水    时间: 2011-3-1 06:06
品赏！
作者: 司马长风    时间: 2011-3-1 21:58
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">直到?昏都倚?，不知?雨??裳---最赏结，余味悠长。</font></p>
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">?物令人?故?---孤平。</font></p>
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">标题建议另拟，感觉不大切合。</font></p>
作者: 木白    时间: 2011-3-2 12:30
谢兄雅赏。
作者: 木白    时间: 2011-3-2 12:31
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>司马长风</i>在2011-3-1 21:58:12的发言：</b><br/>
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">直到?昏都倚?，不知?雨??裳---最赏结，余味悠长。</font></p>
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">?物令人?故?---孤平。</font></p>
<p><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">标题建议另拟，感觉不大切合。</font></p></div>
<p>兄说的是，题目改下，三联也作个修改</p>



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