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标题: 七律 步韵【辛卯开岁诗家联唱】 [打印本页]
作者: 柳浪闻莺    时间: 2011-2-26 10:21
标题: 七律 步韵【辛卯开岁诗家联唱】
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'">   七律步韵【辛卯开岁诗家联唱】</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt" XMLANG="EN-US"><br/> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'">春风疑是丹青手，闲遣山川入画图。</span></p>
<p><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt" XMLANG="EN-US"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'">云里黄沙秦塞远，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'">雨中碧树楚天殊。</span></p>
<p><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt" XMLANG="EN-US"> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'">桃花欲了空枝怨，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'">草色浑销旷野芜。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt" XMLANG="EN-US"><br/> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new="new"  roman'">忽忆昌黎题妙句，千年烟柳满皇都。</span></p>
作者: 白雪仙子    时间: 2011-2-27 10:50
<span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\" roman?? new=\"new\" ?Times mso-hansi-font-family: roman?; new?>忽忆昌黎题妙句，千年烟柳满皇都。</span>----好结
作者: 司马长风    时间: 2011-2-27 16:02
<font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">首联起得好，中二联凑的成分多些，结得随意点，有敷衍了事的感觉。</font>
作者: 文若水    时间: 2011-2-27 17:44
品味一个！
作者: 柳浪闻莺    时间: 2011-2-27 18:03
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>白雪仙子</i>在2011-2-27 10:50:39的发言：</b><br/><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times new=\" new=\"new\" mso-hansi-font-family: roman?? ?Times roman?; new?>忽忆昌黎题妙句，千年烟柳满皇都。</span>----好结 </div>
<p>谢谢仙子版主点评，周末快乐！</p>
作者: 柳浪闻莺    时间: 2011-2-27 18:07
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>司马长风</i>在2011-2-27 16:02:45的发言：</b><br/><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">首联起得好，中二联凑的成分多些，结得随意点，有敷衍了事的感觉。</font> </div>
<p>谢谢司马首版点评，老师点评的极是，呵呵，确实是凑的。我有时间再琢磨修改。周末快乐！</p>
作者: 柳浪闻莺    时间: 2011-2-27 18:08
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>文若水</i>在2011-2-27 17:44:59的发言：</b><br/>品味一个！ </div>
<p>谢谢若水版主赏评，周末快乐！</p>



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