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标题: 七律 再步潇湘惆怅客：（六麻） [打印本页]
作者: 柳浪闻莺    时间: 2011-2-26 12:20
标题: 七律 再步潇湘惆怅客：（六麻）
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">七律 再步潇湘惆怅客：（六麻）</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial"></span> </p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">小技雕虫惹众哗，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">须知物外有方家。</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial"></span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial"></span> </p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">清音未必钗头凤，雅韵何妨狗尾花。</span></p>
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<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">夫子庙前诗作柬，文昌阁里酒当茶。</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial"></span> </p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">邀来惆怅潇湘客，不负春风共晚霞。</span></p>
<p><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: Arial" XMLANG="EN-US"> <wbr></span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial"></span> </p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">附：潇湘惆怅客原玉：</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial"></span> </p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">一任清阴寂不哗，停车独访蔡京家。</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial"></span> </p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">归来陶令惟栽柳，老去潘郎尚种花。</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial"></span> </p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">杖响谁寻岩下药，烟飞自煮雨前茶。</span></p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial"></span> </p>
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">闲谈不觉山中暮，户外睛峰吐赤霞<span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial">。</span> </span></span></p>
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作者: 白雪仙子    时间: 2011-2-27 10:39
请字 是仄读吧？
作者: 白雪仙子    时间: 2011-2-27 10:41
潇湘惆怅客原玉功力不俗
作者: 司马长风    时间: 2011-2-27 16:32
<span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial\">清音未必钗头凤，雅韵何妨狗尾花</span><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">---最赏此联，饶理趣。“钗头凤、狗尾花”甚称的对。</font>
作者: 柳浪闻莺    时间: 2011-2-27 18:11
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>白雪仙子</i>在2011-2-27 10:39:38的发言：</b><br/>请字 是仄读吧？ </div>
<p>嗯，应该是仄声，我改一下。谢谢仙子。</p>
作者: 柳浪闻莺    时间: 2011-2-27 18:12
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>白雪仙子</i>在2011-2-27 10:41:02的发言：</b><br/>潇湘惆怅客原玉功力不俗 </div>
<p>是的，仙子好眼力！</p>
作者: 柳浪闻莺    时间: 2011-2-27 18:15
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>司马长风</i>在2011-2-27 16:32:21的发言：</b><br/><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: arial; mso-hansi-font-family: arial; mso-bidi-font-family: arial\">清音未必钗头凤，雅韵何妨狗尾花</span><font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">---最赏此联，饶理趣。“钗头凤、狗尾花”甚称的对。</font> </div>
<p> 呵呵，我想了半宿才凑上啊。谢谢司马首版。</p>



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