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标题: 文宣堂群作业：【七律-油菜花】 [打印本页]
作者: 萧萧易水寒    时间: 2011-3-3 08:49
标题: 文宣堂群作业：【七律-油菜花】
  
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; WORD-BREAK: break-all; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" class="MsoNormal" align="left"><b><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">十二花仙榜未登，江淮却是久扬名。</span></b><b><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt" lang="EN-US"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-comfficeffice" /><o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; WORD-BREAK: break-all; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" class="MsoNormal" align="left"><b><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">初融细雨萌心动，暗待春雷破土惊。</span></b><b><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; LINE-HEIGHT: 18pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" class="MsoNormal" align="left"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">一夜东风舒锦绣，千顷沃野绽新橙。</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: left; LINE-HEIGHT: 18pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan" class="MsoNormal" align="left"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial">邀春尽举黄金盏，敢笑群芳不盛情。</span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Arial; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt" lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
作者: 浪中行吟    时间: 2011-3-3 14:46
<b style=\"mso-bidi-font-weight: normal\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial\">邀春尽举黄金盏，</span></b>关合油菜花，欣赏！
作者: 司马长风    时间: 2011-3-3 22:26
<font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">附议浪总，欣赏！</font>
作者: 梅影点点    时间: 2011-3-4 08:08
<p align=\"left\"><b>邀春尽举黄金盏，敢笑群芳不盛情。</b><b></b></p>结句不俗，得味！
作者: 萧萧易水寒    时间: 2011-3-4 08:20
标题: 回帖
谢浪坛主、 司马版、梅版点评,以后还请各位多指教！
作者: 非子若云    时间: 2011-3-4 10:13
<p style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: left; LINE-HEIGHT: 18pt; mso-pagination: widow-orphan\" class=\"MsoNormal\" align=\"left\"><b style=\"mso-bidi-font-weight: normal\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial\">邀春尽举黄金盏，敢笑群芳不盛情。</span></b><b style=\"mso-bidi-font-weight: normal\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: Arial; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-font-kerning: 0pt\" lang=\"EN-US\"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = \"urn:schemas-microsoft-comfficeffice\" /><o:p></o:p></span></b></p><br/>好转结！前有一个“春”子，两春可酌减。



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