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标题: 五律?笼中画眉（新韵） [打印本页]

作者: 贾连凯 时间: 2011-3-3 17:00
标题: 五律?笼中画眉（新韵）
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" 0pt? 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><strong><font size="5"><img style="MARGIN: 0px="0px" 10px="10px" 0px="0px" 0px" title="五律?笼中画眉 - 蒲河之子 - 蒲河之子" alt="五律?笼中画眉 - 蒲河之子 - 蒲河之子" src="http://img1.ph.126.net/WnVWRUxUrerR58MahaQvoA==/3189955911063932324.jpg"/></font></strong></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" 0pt? 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><strong><font size="5"></font></strong> </p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" 0pt? 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><strong><font size="5"></font></strong> </p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" 0pt? 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><strong><font size="5">五律?</font><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; FONT-SIZE: 18pt">笼中画眉</span></strong><font face="Arial"> </font></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" 0pt? 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times new=" Roman? New?> </font></span></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" 0pt? 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 16pt">绿荫歌手俏，云水美名扬。<span lang="EN-US"></span></span></b></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" 0pt? 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 16pt">比翼蓝天舞，抒情碧野香。<span lang="EN-US"></span></span></b></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" 0pt? 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 16pt">冷笼囚挚爱，凋羽叹忧伤。<span lang="EN-US"></span></span></b></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" 0pt? 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 16pt">私欲何残忍？悲鸣痛断肠。<span lang="EN-US"></span></span></b></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" 0pt? 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times new=" Roman? New?> </font></span></b></p>
<p style="TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm" align="center" 0pt? 0cm="0cm" 0cm?><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes"><font face="Times new=" Roman? New?> </font></span></span></b><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new=" New? Roman?? ?Times mso-ascii-font-family: Roman?; new="New">庚寅仲夏</span><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes"><font face="Times new=" Roman? New?> </font></span></span></b></p>

[此贴子已经被作者于2011-3-3 17:05:02编辑过]

作者: 司马长风 时间: 2011-3-3 22:14
<font color=\"#0000ff\" size=\"3\">前后对比，手法甚好。</font>

作者: 贾连凯 时间: 2011-3-4 10:04
蒲河喜欢表扬，更喜欢批评。谢首版挚友，呵呵呵----

作者: 非子若云 时间: 2011-3-4 10:11
<p style=\"TEXT-ALIGN: center; MARGIN-TOP: 0cm; MARGIN-LEFT: 0cm; MARGIN-RIGHT: 0cm\" align=\"center\" 0cm? 0cm=\"0cm\" 0pt?><b style=\"mso-bidi-font-weight: normal\"><span style=\"FONT-FAMILY: 仿宋_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 16pt\">冷笼囚挚爱，凋羽叹忧伤。<span lang=\"EN-US\"></span></span></b></p>

作者: 贾连凯 时间: 2011-3-4 16:34
谢非子若云版主赐评！

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