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标题: 一剪梅--《咏菊》 [打印本页]

作者: 竹海愚叟 时间: 2009-10-25 23:13
标题: 一剪梅--《咏菊》
<p><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#000000" size="4"><strong>一剪梅--《咏菊》</strong></font></p>
<p><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#000000" size="4"><strong>---兼和网友芳草萋萋</strong></font></p>
<p><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#000000" size="5"><strong> </strong></font></p>
<p><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#000000" size="4"><strong>遍地黄花遍地秋，</strong></font></p>
<p><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#000000" size="4"><strong>看似凄凉，醉了双眸。</strong></font></p>
<p><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#000000" size="4"><strong>微风摇曳醉容酬，</strong></font></p>
<p><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#000000" size="4"><strong>舞蹈翩翩，荡尽闲愁。</strong></font></p>
<p><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#000000" size="5"><strong> </strong></font></p>
<p><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#000000" size="4"><strong>不惹春风面带羞，</strong></font></p>
<p><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#000000" size="4"><strong>一任风侵，傲放枝头。</strong></font></p>
<p><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#000000" size="4"><strong>闯王曾赋菊花魂，</strong></font></p>
<p><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#000000" size="4"><strong>草木何求，苦了编修。</strong></font></p>
<p><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#000000" size="5"><strong> </strong></font></p>
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<p><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#000000" size="4"><strong>一剪梅《又重阳》</strong></font></p>
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<p><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#000000" size="4">岁岁重阳近晚秋。</font></strong></p>
<p><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#000000" size="4">慢插茱萸，纵目楼头。</font></strong></p>
<p><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#000000" size="4">烟波缭绕逐轻舟。</font></strong></p>
<p><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#000000" size="4">千万相思，欲语还休。</font></strong></p>
<p><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#000000" size="5"> </font></strong></p>
<p><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#000000" size="4">剪断情丝泪溢眸。</font></strong></p>
<p><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#000000" size="4">网内乾坤，击键神游。</font></strong></p>
<p><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#000000" size="4">登高始觉蜀天低，</font></strong></p>
<p><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#000000" size="4">未到长城，壮志羞留。</font></strong></p>
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[此贴子已经被紫嫣郡主于2009-10-26 09:56:45编辑过]

作者: 锄月花樵 时间: 2009-10-26 09:24
问好楼主！两阕结句均有待可酌之处。

作者: 紫嫣郡主 时间: 2009-10-26 09:59
<p><font face=\"Verdana\">重阳节快乐！问好竹海！</font></p>

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