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作者: 五湖明月 时间: 2009-11-1 22:26
标题: 清平乐（漫试雪妆）
清平乐（漫试雪妆）
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<div> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <wbr> <font style="FONT-SIZE: 16px; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体">乙丑戌月戌日逢深秋月圆之日，</font></div>
<div><font style="FONT-SIZE: 16px; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体">昼雪夜霁弥望夜空，四顾萧条余怀怆然，感今慨昔得之。</font></div>
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<div pattern="4|5"><font style="FONT-SIZE: 16px; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体">晚秋时节，卷月乍凉雪。</font></div>
<div pattern="7|6"><font style="FONT-SIZE: 16px; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体">芳草碧色与君绝，闲艳拼书弄阕。</font></div><br jquery1256604060796="224"/>
<div jquery1256604060796="225"><font style="FONT-SIZE: 16px; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体">凌波谁与惊飘？霜凋天浦寂寥。</font></div>
<div jquery1256604060796="226"><font style="FONT-SIZE: 16px; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体">情澈无极迢迢，挽弓不问天骄。</font></div>
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<div pattern="12"><font color="#ff0000"><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体" color="#000000">作者自注：</font></font></div>
<div pattern="12"><font color="#ff0000"><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体" color="#000000">1.霁，雨雪停止。2.弥望：满眼。</font></font></div>
<div pattern="12"><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体">3.怆然：<span>陈子昂</span>《登幽州台歌》“<span>念天地之悠悠,独怆然而涕下”。</span></font></div>
<div pattern="12"><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体"><span>4.</span><font color="#ff0000"><font color="#000000">.卷月：暮晚被乌云遮住的月亮。</font></font></font></div>
<div pattern="12"><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体">5..霜凋：秋霜使青草变得干枯。6..浦，水岸。</font></div>
<div pattern="12"><font style="FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体">7.情澈：明白，至情。8.迢迢：高远。</font></div>
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<div pattern="12"><font color="#ff0000"><font color="#000000"><font color="#000000">例词：</font></font></font></div>
<div pattern="12"><font color="#ff0000"><font color="#000000"><font color="#000000">张炎《清平乐（寻芳人杳）》</font></font></font></div></blockquote>
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<div jquery1256604060796="222"><span>中</span>平<span>中</span><span>仄</span><span>（韵）</span>，<span>中</span>仄平平<span>仄</span><span>（韵）</span>。</div>
<div pattern="4|5">采芳人杳，顿觉游情少。</div>
<div jquery1256604060796="223"><span>中</span>仄<span>中</span>平平仄<span>仄</span><span>（韵）</span>，<span>中</span>仄<span>中</span>平<span>中</span><span>仄</span><span>（韵）</span>。</div>
<div pattern="7|6">客里看春多草草，总被诗愁分了。</div><br jquery1256604060796="224"/>
<div jquery1256604060796="225"><span>中</span>平<span>中</span>仄平<span>平</span><span>（韵）</span>，<span>中</span>平<span>中</span>仄平<span>平</span><span>（韵）</span>。</div>
<div pattern="6|6">去年燕子天涯，今年燕子谁家？</div>
<div jquery1256604060796="226"><span>中</span>仄<span>中</span>平<span>中</span>仄，<span>中</span>平<span>中</span>仄平<span>平</span><span>（韵）</span>。</div>
<div pattern="12">三月休听夜雨，如今不是催花。</div>
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作者: 落雁公主 时间: 2009-11-3 12:53
五湖现在也按格律了。。难得啊。。呵呵

作者: 五湖明月 时间: 2009-11-3 18:52
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>湘弦绝响</i>在2009-11-01 23:26:42的发言：</b><br/>
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<div pattern=\"4|5\"><font style=\"FONT-SIZE: 16px; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体\"><span>中</span>平<span>中</span><span>仄</span><span>（韵）</span>，<span>中</span>仄平平<span>仄</span><span>（韵）</span>。</font></div>
<div pattern=\"4|5\"><font style=\"FONT-SIZE: 16px; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体\">晚秋时节，卷月(乍，读仄)凉雪。</font></div>
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<div pattern=\"4|5\"><span>中</span>仄<span>中</span>平平仄<span>仄</span><span>（韵）</span>，<span>中</span>仄<span>中</span>平<span>中</span><span>仄</span><span>（韵）</span>。</div>
<div pattern=\"7|6\"><font style=\"FONT-SIZE: 16px; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体\">芳草碧(色,应平)(与，应平)(君,应仄)绝，闲艳拼书弄阕。</font></div><br jquery1256604060796=\"224\"/>
<div jquery1256604060796=\"225\"><font style=\"FONT-SIZE: 16px; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体\"><span>中</span>平<span>中</span>仄平<span>平</span><span>（韵）</span>，<span>中</span>平<span>中</span>仄平<span>平</span><span>（韵）</span>。</font></div>
<div jquery1256604060796=\"225\"><font style=\"FONT-SIZE: 16px; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体\">凌波谁与惊飘？霜凋天浦(寂,读仄)寥。</font></div>
<div jquery1256604060796=\"226\"><font style=\"FONT-SIZE: 16px; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体\">
<div jquery1256604060796=\"226\"><span>中</span>仄<span>中</span>平<span>中</span>仄，<span>中</span>平<span>中</span>仄平<span>平</span><span>（韵）</span>。</div></font></div>
<div jquery1256604060796=\"226\"><font style=\"FONT-SIZE: 16px; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312,楷体\">情澈无(极，读仄)迢迢，挽弓不问天骄</font></div></div>
<p>谢了，只是随心为之，并未效验，下次注意哈，以后请多指教，明月问好</p>

作者: 五湖明月 时间: 2009-11-3 18:53
<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>落雁公主</i>在2009-11-03 12:53:48的发言：</b><br/>五湖现在也按格律了。。难得啊。。呵呵 </div>
<p>俺是规矩人，怎不会懂得方圆之道呢，是不是呢公主？</p>

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