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标题: 鹧鸪天/乡愁（飘红关注） [打印本页]

作者: 千山暮雪 时间: 2009-11-8 13:07
标题: 鹧鸪天/乡愁（飘红关注）
<span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"> </span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><span style="FONT-STYLE: italic"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">几回把酒黯伤魂，<span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">独对暮天醉意沉。</span></span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-STYLE: italic"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">西风烟柳水光碧，</span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-STYLE: italic"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">落日天涯草色深。 </span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><br/><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-STYLE: italic"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"> 离人泪，游子心，</span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr> <span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-STYLE: italic"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">梦里山河依旧春。 </span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-STYLE: italic"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">扶栏南望故园路， </span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-STYLE: italic"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em">满眼苍茫万里云！</span><wbr></span><wbr></span><wbr>

[此贴子已经被浪中行吟于2009-11-08 15:37:26编辑过]

作者: 浪中行吟 时间: 2009-11-8 15:37
<p>欣赏好词，尤喜下阕，上阙二四句意稍近。问好！先飘红！</p>

作者: 落雁公主 时间: 2009-11-8 15:57
<p><font face=\"Verdana\">⊙仄平平⊙仄平（韵）<br/>⊙平⊙仄仄平平（韵）<br/>⊙平⊙仄平平仄（句）<br/>⊙仄平平⊙仄平（韵）</font></p>
<p><font face=\"Verdana\">平仄仄（句）<br/>仄平平（韵）<br/>⊙平⊙仄仄平平（韵）<br/>⊙平⊙仄平平仄（句）<br/>⊙仄平平⊙仄平（韵）</font></p> 请问朋友的这股填词谱是哪个？问好楼主。。

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