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标题: 竹海--人间仙境 [打印本页]

作者: 竹海愚叟 时间: 2009-8-1 22:15
标题: 竹海--人间仙境
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; COLOR: #9900cc; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">波涛起伏翠云吞，万里霞烟绕堡墩。</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; COLOR: #9900cc; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">涧水欢歌心底出，嘉宾笑语壑峰存。</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; COLOR: #9900cc; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">忘忧谷内尘埃散，仙寓洞中暮鼓浑。</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; COLOR: #9900cc; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.8em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">潇洒一回天界去，乾坤颠倒醉晨昏。</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>

作者: 如是我闲 时间: 2009-8-2 13:26
<p>颈联对句孤平了。</p>
<p>潇洒一回，这样的用语，较为粗鄙生硬，能避免就尽量避免啦。</p>

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