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标题: [原创]七律己丑秋雁?山??八章 [打印本页]

作者: ?白居士 时间: 2009-11-25 12:11
标题: [原创]七律己丑秋雁?山??八章
七律己丑秋雁?山??之一 简体字对照本：
如幻丹崖翠嶂幽，呼盟?就菊花秋。 <span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">如幻丹崖翠嶂幽，呼盟趋就菊花秋。
?天星露科?坐，?壑??把臂?。 <span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">满天星露科头坐，万壑烟岚把臂游。
此夕???雁?，昨宵?雨下?湫。 <span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">此夕闲云来雁荡，昨宵旧雨下龙湫。
天涯一舸人?後，方寸?删故?愁。 <span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">天涯一舸人归后，方寸谁删故国愁。
 
七律己丑秋雁?山??之二 
泉?淅??中?，?桕初霜浸紫氛。 <span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">泉声淅沥梦中闻，枫桕初霜浸紫氛。
澄水一泓宜枕石，翠?三面欲留?。 <span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">澄水一泓宜枕石，翠峦三面欲留云。
扶筇??山??、解佩中洲杜若芬。 <span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">扶筇绝?山岚净，解佩中洲杜若芬。
?????急溜，砉然浩邈走千?。 <span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">显胜门边腾急溜，砉然浩邈走千军。
 
七律己丑秋雁?山??之三 
名山登?慕高踪，吟??舒磊?胸。 <span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">名山登览慕高踪，吟啸颇舒磊块胸。
?指古今光荏苒，放眸?列???。 <span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">弹指古今光荏苒，放眸环列绿葱茏。
秋深方竭寒潭水，夜杪??古??。 <span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">秋深方竭寒潭水，夜杪犹传古?钟。
他日重???取，疏星?露傍?峰。 <span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">他日重游应记取，疏星凉露傍灵峰。
 
七律己丑秋雁?山??之四 
形??南今雨?，扶筇登眺徙崔嵬。 <span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">形胜东南今雨来，扶筇登眺徙崔嵬。
山?亘古???，泉落?霄?象?。 <span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">山横亘古烟云合，泉落层霄气象开。
走?峰???盼，迎人??不?猜。 <span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">走马峰峦犹顾盼，迎人鸥鹭不惊猜。
浩茫?有思?客，久立深秋白石?。 <span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">浩茫应有思乡客，久立深秋白石台。
 
七律己丑秋雁?山??之五 
?南走??雄奇，山色泉?供??。 <span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">东南走笔觅雄奇，山色泉声供赋诗。
海上??恒??，胸中丘壑自?崎。 <span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">海上风云恒际会，胸中丘壑自?崎。
人?大??盟在，?落?廊???。 <span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">人归大泽鸥盟在，叶落虚廊鹤梦迟。
最是消魂?照後，??秋寺雨??。 <span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">最是消魂残照后，灵岩秋寺雨丝丝。 
 
七律己丑秋雁?山??之六 
?衽??入翠微，晨??雨故霏霏。 <span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">敛衽临虚入翠微，晨岚酿雨故霏霏。
??奇??虹化，潭底沉蛟欲??。 <span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">峦头奇气将虹化，潭底沉蛟欲剑飞。
心?已忘?豆子，生涯???蓑衣。 <span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">心绪已忘红豆子，生涯犹恋绿蓑衣。
?身天地茫茫也，逆旅百年知我稀。 <span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">侧身天地茫茫也，逆旅百年知我稀。
 
七律己丑秋雁?山??之七 
?林??向南翔，?遣?戈挽??。 <span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">绕林乌鹊向南翔，谁遣长戈挽鲁阳。
暝色??君?笛，秋光涉?我褰裳。 <span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">暝色当轩君?笛，秋光涉?我褰裳。
?泉碧?星潭水，玉露凝寒月窟霜。 <span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">银泉碧净星潭水，玉露凝寒月窟霜。
欲????海客，曾??外??桑？ <span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">欲问归来沧海客，曾观尘外几红桑？
 
七律己丑秋雁?山??之八 
?山?海迥?涯，晴雨南天幻?霞。 <span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">苍山横海迥无涯，晴雨南天幻晓霞。
?嶂?????，?空浩渺??槎。 <span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">迭嶂峥嵘开雾阙，虚空浩渺驭云槎。
清溪花?千桃?，曲???五柳家。 <span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">清溪花发千桃树，曲涧桥连五柳家。
逸?琴?如有?，倩君?品武陵茶。 <span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">逸兴琴书如有约，倩君细品武陵茶。

[此贴子已经被司马长风于2009-11-25 21:43:04编辑过]

作者: ?白居士 时间: 2009-11-25 21:39
??湘弦???注加精！???石??雅?！

作者: 司马长风 时间: 2009-11-25 21:50
<div class=\"quote\">以下是引用顽石在2009-11-25 19:59:50的发言： 学习先生一组好律！己丑秋雁?山??－－－清溪花?千桃?？ </div>
同感。既是秋游，怎见“花发千桃树”？请先生赐教一回。

作者: ?白居士 时间: 2009-11-26 05:12
答覆司?先生：本作「花落千桃?」，嫌?于??！想像桃花源中花???，四季??耳！况值此十月小?春之?，碧桃花?亦非莫?有之事！

作者: 浪中行吟 时间: 2009-11-26 18:18
拜赏！

作者: 一行白鹭 时间: 2009-11-27 11:35
好诗已经推荐到百花潭共赏。

作者: 馨月 时间: 2009-11-27 17:13
学习佳作,谢谢司马老师的翻译.

作者: 白雪仙子 时间: 2009-11-27 19:12
一直碍于繁体字不能领略居士七律的精妙，谢谢司马版主的翻译。
今天读来果然痛快，不愧是精品！

作者: 土烟斗 时间: 2011-1-20 10:27
欣赏精品。

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