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标题: (原创)七绝?临屏唱和一组?《闻莺听雨》 [打印本页]

作者: 柳浪闻莺 时间: 2009-12-10 03:02
标题: (原创)七绝?临屏唱和一组?《闻莺听雨》
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[此贴子已经被作者于2009-12-11 00:50:21编辑过]

作者: 又是秋色 时间: 2009-12-10 13:20
唱和乃佳话也，欣赏。

作者: 一行白鹭 时间: 2009-12-10 17:44
标题: 原创顶针体【（越调。小桃红）、游世博（新韵）】
<font size=\"4\">都是快才。</font>

作者: 锄月花樵 时间: 2009-12-10 19:49
雅事足见雅趣也。

作者: 青山依旧 时间: 2009-12-10 21:17
标题: [分享]《我在网上等你》，口头禅变夏鸣新歌
<p><font face=\"Times New=\"New\" Roman\">临屏唱和，当今乐事。唯快才可享，俺站在一旁欣赏~0~</font></p>

作者: 柳浪闻莺 时间: 2009-12-11 00:48
诚谢又是秋色，一行白鹭，锄月花樵，顽石，青山依旧各位老师的点评，问好！

作者: 司马长风 时间: 2009-12-11 20:36
临屏唱和，要的就是一个快，但快则未免粗糙，俗话说“慢工出细活”，发到这里来，还要打磨一下才好。

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