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标题: 七律。英雄篇 [打印本页]

作者: 梦落无痕 时间: 2009-8-6 00:49
标题: 七律。英雄篇

<p align="center"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#0000ff" size="4"><strong>【英雄】</strong></font></p>
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<p align="center"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#0000ff" size="4"><strong>丹书铁剑护山河，戎马生涯鏖战多。</strong></font></p>
<p align="center"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#0000ff" size="4"><strong>怒斩雄关惊虎豹，狂啸大漠悍龙蛇。</strong></font></p>
<p align="center"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#0000ff" size="4"><strong>荡平胡虏疆川净，踏碎烽烟复故国。</strong></font></p>
<p align="center"><font face="楷体_GB2312" color="#0000ff" size="4"><strong>热血男儿定海志，豪情谱写大风歌。</strong></font></p>
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<p style="LINE-HEIGHT: 19.2pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 13.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312"><font color="#0000ff" size="4"><strong>【壮士行】</strong></font></span></p>
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<p style="LINE-HEIGHT: 19.2pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 13.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312"><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff"><strong> 铁胆忠魂壮士心，纵横漠北洒豪情。</strong></font></font></span></p>
<p style="LINE-HEIGHT: 19.2pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 13.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312"><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff"><strong>马蹄踏月剑啸冷，血刃逐风虎狼惊。<span lang="EN-US"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com

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<p style="LINE-HEIGHT: 19.2pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><font size="4"><strong><span style="FONT-SIZE: 13.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312"><font color="#0000ff"><font size="4">力挽长弓取敌阵，气吹太白破雄兵</font>。</font></span></strong></font></p>
<p style="LINE-HEIGHT: 19.2pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="center"><font size="4"><strong><font color="#0000ff"><font face="楷体_GB2312"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 13.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312"><font size="4"><font color="#0000ff">碧</font><span style="FONT-SIZE: 13.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312"><font color="#0000ff" size="4">誓将</font></span><font face="楷体_GB2312"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 13.5pt; COLOR: black; mso-ascii-font-family: 楷体_GB2312"><font color="#0000ff" size="4">?</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 13.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312"><font color="#0000ff"><font size="4">土埋忠骨</font>，</font></span></font><font color="#0000ff">血换来四海平。</font></font></span></font></font></strong></font></p>
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[此贴子已经被作者于2009-08-06 00:50:23编辑过]

作者: 水应天龙 时间: 2009-8-6 09:58
气势不错！

作者: 浪迹天涯 时间: 2009-9-4 12:57
<p>气势不错格律不共从韵脚来看楼主用的当是新韵新韵应当加以注明现在写诗词的多是女儿情长少有激扬豪放 </p>
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<p>希望楼主保持这样的风格保持这样的心态 <img src=\"images/post/smile/dvbbs/em23.gif\" /></p>

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