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标题:
虞美人
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作者:
碧柳烟波
时间:
2009-8-13 22:34
标题:
虞美人
<p align="center"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: 'Impact'">虞美人</span><wbr><wbr><br/><br/></p>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="left"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: 'Impact'">秋悲夜冷眠寒雨,</span></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: 'Impact'">愿饮梅霜苦,</span></span></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="left"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: 'Impact'"></span></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: 'Impact'">谁怜白发写哀愁,</span></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: 'Impact'">只叹韶华一去不堪留.</span><wbr></span><wbr></div>
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<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="left"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><wbr><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: 'Impact'">江波柳咽伤情薄,</span></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: 'Impact'">且把痴心锁,</span></span></div>
<div style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" align="left"><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: 'Impact'"></span></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: 'Impact'">轮回春夏又秋冬,</span></span><span style="FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 32px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: 'Impact'">俯首红尘幻梦已成空.</span></span></div>
作者:
苇雨一笑
时间:
2009-8-14 15:46
标题:
原创七律?重阳小赋
薄是入声，和锁不在一个韵目。锁上声。
作者:
碧柳烟波
时间:
2009-8-15 09:10
<p><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\" Roman\'; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\" Roman\'; mso-bidi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\" Roman\'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA\"> 谢谢！</span></p>
<p><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\" Roman\'; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\" Roman\'; mso-bidi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\" Roman\'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA\"> 这个问题我在创作时已经注意过了，由于在平水中没找到合适的字，我便根据2004年发表的《中华新韵》规则，把“薄”按去声处理了，然后使用了上去通押。</span></p>
<p><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\" Roman\'; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\" Roman\'; mso-bidi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\" Roman\'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA\"> 第一，怪我没作说明。</span></p>
<p><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\" Roman\'; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\" Roman\'; mso-bidi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\" Roman\'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA\"> 第二，尚不知这样是否行得通，我于是按普通话的标准，念了一下，觉得顺口，就使用了。</span></p>
<p><span style=\"FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\" Roman\'; mso-hansi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\" Roman\'; mso-bidi-font-family: \'Times New=\"New\" Roman\'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA\"> 再次表示感谢！</span></p>
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