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楼主
发表于 2010-8-17 22:58:23 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
<span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">在蝶儿的环绕下</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">你说,你不做鲜花</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">愿做小草</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">于是,蝶儿遁去</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">天籁的声音响起</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">我说,我愿做沃土</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">落叶向我挥手</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">肥沃着我的肥沃</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">小草扎根沃土</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">沐风,吟雨</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">茂盛着你的茂盛</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">芊芊玉手摇落斜阳,星斗</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">鸟儿在空中歌唱</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">歌声震落草尖上的露珠</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">渗入沃土</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">你的手触及到了我的心脏</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">我的心在跳</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">你的手在抖</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"><span style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">小草和沃土的依恋</span><wbr> </span><wbr></span><wbr><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 24px; COLOR: #990000; LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em; FONT-FAMILY: '楷体_GB2312'">永久,永久......</span><wbr> <img id="paperPicArea1" style="DISPLAY: none; POSITION: relative; TOP: auto" src="http://ctc.qzs.qq.com/ac/b.gif"/>
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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2010-8-20 22:29:52 | 只看该作者
两位斑竹辛苦!
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板凳
发表于 2010-8-18 00:26:18 | 只看该作者
脉搏清晰,形象、生动、深刻。拟人喻事深入浅出,只有密不可分的“依恋”,才有生生不息,突出了“依恋”与存在的重大意义。剥去浮华见本质,此处“依恋”留下的绝非是想象空间,而是沉痛地思考空间!好诗!学习了
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地板
发表于 2010-8-18 12:55:28 | 只看该作者
依恋,或许是一种磁力线的切割
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