[原创]虞美人?赠春（新韵）

萧萧易水寒

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梅影点点

两结俱好，激赏！

浪中行吟

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砚浓

<p>砚浓对新韵知之甚少。弱弱地问哈楼主，为何强把这一阕词标作新韵咧，“袭”在新韵里应该是平声吧？</p>

一阳居士

<div class=\"quote\"><b>以下是引用<i>砚浓</i>在2010-12-14 21:37:02的发言：</b><br/>
<p>砚浓对新韵知之甚少。弱弱地问哈楼主，为何强把这一阕词标作新韵咧，“袭”在新韵里应该是平声吧？</p></div>
<p>砚浓所言极是，袭字新韵为平声，此处为仄声，构架松散，结构尚不严谨，需重构，个见！问候嘉友！</p>

文若水

时令有点乱。